for The Wizard Ashikabi8/19 c11 Jalnir
This is a wonderful and well-written story. I just wish there was mote of it. Thank you for sharing your vision.
This is a wonderful and well-written story. I just wish there was mote of it. Thank you for sharing your vision.
3/2 c3 jimmy.oz
Too be honest i feel like Karasuba wouldn't want the weapon at least not in her fight with Musubi.
Too be honest i feel like Karasuba wouldn't want the weapon at least not in her fight with Musubi.
3/2 c1 jimmy.oz
Well story seems interesting but needs updated which will probably not happen after this long lol.
Well story seems interesting but needs updated which will probably not happen after this long lol.
9/3/2022 c1 Please read me
The Wizard Ashikabi, Ch:1.05
After the point Harry Potter gets revenge in this fiction can you make a divergent point and create a second fiction where Harry Potter acts more like the ultimate tactician / detective and trains up his body his magical skills his abilities diversifies his abilities and consider 300% the perfect goal in every skill like Batman except able to use magic but then also have the gearhead like Tony Stark or the best part is in this ultimate version of this story have Harry Potter like trip and hit his head or something but exposed to some energy or something that causes a glitch to occur when the hollows trying to resurrect him that merges him with like five of his past lives and amalgam version of Batman taking the very best traits and very best abilities tools and capabilities of Batman amalgam Tony Stark taking the best abilities tools and stuff intelligence of Tony Stark give Harry Potter magic circuits and reality marvel that's filled with 50 reality marbles including shero emra's sword marble so that's three people so far and the reason why Mr emra couldn't access the other reality marvels is because the cursed fire burned out to connections in his soul so it had to redirect connections using only the strongest marble miracle thingy kind of like using several cars frames and like bending and twisting and reforging those frames until you create one car anyway you got three persons you got two more people you can fill in yourself and it would be totally awesome to see this type of fiction from this point in the story after he got his revenge for the thing to occur and then go into the city where the game is going on cuz I can't pronounce the species and the text to speech keeps on trying to spell it as shiki instead of what it actually is and I forgot how to spell it anyway since he's got Batman's determination to beyond Master every technique ability his abilities and skills including combat strategy and skill in every field possible and the Tony Stark part of him will counter some of the rough edges on the Batman part of him but I still allowing him to put on the Batman like emotional mask that way the very core of his being he's laughing on the inside while on the outside he's being stern and scary like Batman and then Harry Potter creates a voice changer as well that use like 47 million layers you know voice change after voice change at the voice change while the last one the end product it sounds gravely except unlike Batman it also sounds extremely manly and almost constantly pissed off it's the point of the voice in the appearance is a scare opponents to make himself seem like in otherworldly dark avenging spirit God thing of course Batman didn't get everything so it look like a dark avenging spirit so I mean seriously everyone was so afraid of Batman that is very Shadow f****** scares him out of their mind they literally see the Shadow and they go nope maybe you can also hint that Harry Potter had a bunch of blocks and that receiving memories and skills and stuff from his past life completely negated all the damage that Dumbledore and ministry and his parents unintentionally done to him I'm just spitballing and trying to give you ideas to formulate the story because so far and these type of stories the main character is basically sitting back and just going twiddling his thumbs Harry Potter can't do that the very core his being is shaped into becoming savior / sword. Look Natalia from marvel comics she was a member of the red room the Red room was a Russian child soldier weapon program that brainwashed manipulated and broke the children repetitively over and over and over and over and over so the only thing they can be is a weapon slash tool for a wielder they also enhance the child but not too much enough so they can get the optimal fighting / assassin but not enough where they can't control that fighting assassin weapon tool Harry Potter went under not as refined version of that scenario well let's see Harry Potter lived in a heavily abusive environment in the books their children's books so 99% of the self that may have actually gone on is hidden they were yelling at him putting them inside of a very small hoverboard underneath the stairs sensory deprivation close environment dirty living conditions self-esteem self image destruction horrible habit habits that were instilled into him down to instinctual that prevent him from saying no to whoever that's their master it was implied in the original 10 copies that Vernon used to beat and torture Harry Potter and he is worked since he was a 3-year-old to cook to clean to sweep and mop and do the chores and laundry everything by hand wow the dursleys sat around and started calling him names and stuff treating him as if he was a piece of the furniture or an object to be used in thrown away when he did something that the displeased pissed him off I don't know him too much now on top of that he's brought into a magical environment where he is not being treated like worse than what s*** considers s*** that considers s*** he gobbled up the positive attention that was also used to hide the poison to make Harry Potter loyal both both metaphorically and literally some people have half theorized that Harry Potter was under a cocktail of different potions of different types including alchemical potions love potions loyalty potions anxiety potions potions to restrictus intelligence potions to restrict his intellect etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc these potions that are strict certain mental things is basically meant to be the eye blockers on horses that make it sounded the horses can only see in front of them so they're easyer to use as a workhorse or a pack mule or stage horse or a coach horse or whatever similar effects that literally make it impossible for Harry Potter to think for himself basically they plugged her remote control into Harry Potter's brain and chose all the options for him and made him go into directions and whatever way they wanted him to go into just like the Red room and their sleeper agent programming and thinks that reincarnation thingy for my suggestion all of that stuff has been purged from his system and he's given knowledge of relatively healthy people to remold himself into not a weapon tool but a warrior soldier saint savior wizard extraordinaire he still has the damage done to his psyche where he has a people saving thing except it's not a complete and total compulsion anymore where he jumps in head first this lettering and his ravenclaw and his Hufflepuff and his thousand other faces and aspects are now United and working in one single tandem thread mind aspect he's no longer a bunch of shards locked away in a box where he can't get to it a shortcut but retaining all the growth they got as shards but he is now whole instead of being a clear window it's more like those colored windows that you get in the church Harry Potter soul is the most badass soul there is the rarest soul ever it's basically like having a shiny Pokemon but a shiny limited edition super deluxe Pokemon who has extremely powerful stats and output in comparison to regular shiny Pokemon that's what Harry Potter sold looks like to the gods and the planet he's so unique and so beautiful and precious that even Alia won't touch his f****** s*** because she's like I don't want to accidentally damage him because he's so beautiful he'll just become some sort of dull Rock useless version of that rock where it can't be shaped or rot or even used to wear bashing because it would just like a sponge you can't even use it as a sponge because it won't act like a rock etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc
The Wizard Ashikabi, Ch:1.05
After the point Harry Potter gets revenge in this fiction can you make a divergent point and create a second fiction where Harry Potter acts more like the ultimate tactician / detective and trains up his body his magical skills his abilities diversifies his abilities and consider 300% the perfect goal in every skill like Batman except able to use magic but then also have the gearhead like Tony Stark or the best part is in this ultimate version of this story have Harry Potter like trip and hit his head or something but exposed to some energy or something that causes a glitch to occur when the hollows trying to resurrect him that merges him with like five of his past lives and amalgam version of Batman taking the very best traits and very best abilities tools and capabilities of Batman amalgam Tony Stark taking the best abilities tools and stuff intelligence of Tony Stark give Harry Potter magic circuits and reality marvel that's filled with 50 reality marbles including shero emra's sword marble so that's three people so far and the reason why Mr emra couldn't access the other reality marvels is because the cursed fire burned out to connections in his soul so it had to redirect connections using only the strongest marble miracle thingy kind of like using several cars frames and like bending and twisting and reforging those frames until you create one car anyway you got three persons you got two more people you can fill in yourself and it would be totally awesome to see this type of fiction from this point in the story after he got his revenge for the thing to occur and then go into the city where the game is going on cuz I can't pronounce the species and the text to speech keeps on trying to spell it as shiki instead of what it actually is and I forgot how to spell it anyway since he's got Batman's determination to beyond Master every technique ability his abilities and skills including combat strategy and skill in every field possible and the Tony Stark part of him will counter some of the rough edges on the Batman part of him but I still allowing him to put on the Batman like emotional mask that way the very core of his being he's laughing on the inside while on the outside he's being stern and scary like Batman and then Harry Potter creates a voice changer as well that use like 47 million layers you know voice change after voice change at the voice change while the last one the end product it sounds gravely except unlike Batman it also sounds extremely manly and almost constantly pissed off it's the point of the voice in the appearance is a scare opponents to make himself seem like in otherworldly dark avenging spirit God thing of course Batman didn't get everything so it look like a dark avenging spirit so I mean seriously everyone was so afraid of Batman that is very Shadow f****** scares him out of their mind they literally see the Shadow and they go nope maybe you can also hint that Harry Potter had a bunch of blocks and that receiving memories and skills and stuff from his past life completely negated all the damage that Dumbledore and ministry and his parents unintentionally done to him I'm just spitballing and trying to give you ideas to formulate the story because so far and these type of stories the main character is basically sitting back and just going twiddling his thumbs Harry Potter can't do that the very core his being is shaped into becoming savior / sword. Look Natalia from marvel comics she was a member of the red room the Red room was a Russian child soldier weapon program that brainwashed manipulated and broke the children repetitively over and over and over and over and over so the only thing they can be is a weapon slash tool for a wielder they also enhance the child but not too much enough so they can get the optimal fighting / assassin but not enough where they can't control that fighting assassin weapon tool Harry Potter went under not as refined version of that scenario well let's see Harry Potter lived in a heavily abusive environment in the books their children's books so 99% of the self that may have actually gone on is hidden they were yelling at him putting them inside of a very small hoverboard underneath the stairs sensory deprivation close environment dirty living conditions self-esteem self image destruction horrible habit habits that were instilled into him down to instinctual that prevent him from saying no to whoever that's their master it was implied in the original 10 copies that Vernon used to beat and torture Harry Potter and he is worked since he was a 3-year-old to cook to clean to sweep and mop and do the chores and laundry everything by hand wow the dursleys sat around and started calling him names and stuff treating him as if he was a piece of the furniture or an object to be used in thrown away when he did something that the displeased pissed him off I don't know him too much now on top of that he's brought into a magical environment where he is not being treated like worse than what s*** considers s*** that considers s*** he gobbled up the positive attention that was also used to hide the poison to make Harry Potter loyal both both metaphorically and literally some people have half theorized that Harry Potter was under a cocktail of different potions of different types including alchemical potions love potions loyalty potions anxiety potions potions to restrictus intelligence potions to restrict his intellect etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc these potions that are strict certain mental things is basically meant to be the eye blockers on horses that make it sounded the horses can only see in front of them so they're easyer to use as a workhorse or a pack mule or stage horse or a coach horse or whatever similar effects that literally make it impossible for Harry Potter to think for himself basically they plugged her remote control into Harry Potter's brain and chose all the options for him and made him go into directions and whatever way they wanted him to go into just like the Red room and their sleeper agent programming and thinks that reincarnation thingy for my suggestion all of that stuff has been purged from his system and he's given knowledge of relatively healthy people to remold himself into not a weapon tool but a warrior soldier saint savior wizard extraordinaire he still has the damage done to his psyche where he has a people saving thing except it's not a complete and total compulsion anymore where he jumps in head first this lettering and his ravenclaw and his Hufflepuff and his thousand other faces and aspects are now United and working in one single tandem thread mind aspect he's no longer a bunch of shards locked away in a box where he can't get to it a shortcut but retaining all the growth they got as shards but he is now whole instead of being a clear window it's more like those colored windows that you get in the church Harry Potter soul is the most badass soul there is the rarest soul ever it's basically like having a shiny Pokemon but a shiny limited edition super deluxe Pokemon who has extremely powerful stats and output in comparison to regular shiny Pokemon that's what Harry Potter sold looks like to the gods and the planet he's so unique and so beautiful and precious that even Alia won't touch his f****** s*** because she's like I don't want to accidentally damage him because he's so beautiful he'll just become some sort of dull Rock useless version of that rock where it can't be shaped or rot or even used to wear bashing because it would just like a sponge you can't even use it as a sponge because it won't act like a rock etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc
9/3/2022 c1 Please read me
The Wizard Ashikabi, Ch:1
Idea for a alternate version of the story that could go on longer especially if you have a crossover event once you finish with this world have Harry Potter gain the knowledge and abilities of five people across the multiverse as reincarnated memories skills and potential powers have Batman detective / analytical skill and his drive to get as many different skills and abilities possible and diversify and perfect those skills until there's nothing left to be taught and then develop your own skills that branches off from those skills either mixing the matching or leveling up so to speak and then after it's mixed and match leveled up cuz that's what Batman would do he would become so obsessive about learning everything minute detail detail and he would exercise to become Olympian athlete level peak human wizards are equivalent to 100 humans in potential strength and ability at least and that's the inbred weak ass morons that stuff himself unhealthy food and lays about because they're losers Harry Potter has a work ethic now equivalent to Bruce Wayne / Batman now all the negatives that come with Batman can be counterbalanced with everything he gains from Tony Stark and all the negatives he can gain from optimize patchwork Tony Stark can be counterbalanced by optimized patchwork Batman and then give him knowledge and skills magic circuits and reality marvel that holds five reality marbles the center reality marvel should be Mr emras from fate stay night I'll let you decide the other four and since I said three people and they're supposed to be five people I'll let you decide the other two people mix and match level up and/or just plain level up between his skills their skills and any potential skills he can learn in the world that he's going to master thanks to the Batman part of his past period.
The Wizard Ashikabi, Ch:1
Idea for a alternate version of the story that could go on longer especially if you have a crossover event once you finish with this world have Harry Potter gain the knowledge and abilities of five people across the multiverse as reincarnated memories skills and potential powers have Batman detective / analytical skill and his drive to get as many different skills and abilities possible and diversify and perfect those skills until there's nothing left to be taught and then develop your own skills that branches off from those skills either mixing the matching or leveling up so to speak and then after it's mixed and match leveled up cuz that's what Batman would do he would become so obsessive about learning everything minute detail detail and he would exercise to become Olympian athlete level peak human wizards are equivalent to 100 humans in potential strength and ability at least and that's the inbred weak ass morons that stuff himself unhealthy food and lays about because they're losers Harry Potter has a work ethic now equivalent to Bruce Wayne / Batman now all the negatives that come with Batman can be counterbalanced with everything he gains from Tony Stark and all the negatives he can gain from optimize patchwork Tony Stark can be counterbalanced by optimized patchwork Batman and then give him knowledge and skills magic circuits and reality marvel that holds five reality marbles the center reality marvel should be Mr emras from fate stay night I'll let you decide the other four and since I said three people and they're supposed to be five people I'll let you decide the other two people mix and match level up and/or just plain level up between his skills their skills and any potential skills he can learn in the world that he's going to master thanks to the Batman part of his past period.
9/3/2022 c1 Please read me
The Wizard Ashikabi, Ch:1.05
After the point Harry Potter gets revenge in this fiction can you make a divergent point and create a second fiction where Harry Potter acts more like the ultimate tactician / detective and trains up his body his magical skills his abilities diversifies his abilities and consider 300% the perfect goal in every skill like Batman except able to use magic but then also have the gearhead like Tony Stark or the best part is in this ultimate version of this story have Harry Potter like trip and hit his head or something but exposed to some energy or something that causes a glitch to occur when the hollows trying to resurrect him that merges him with like five of his past lives and amalgam version of Batman taking the very best traits and very best abilities tools and capabilities of Batman amalgam Tony Stark taking the best abilities tools and stuff intelligence of Tony Stark give Harry Potter magic circuits and reality marvel that's filled with 50 reality marbles including shero emra's sword marble so that's three people so far and the reason why Mr emra couldn't access the other reality marvels is because the cursed fire burned out to connections in his soul so it had to redirect connections using only the strongest marble miracle thingy kind of like using several cars frames and like bending and twisting and reforging those frames until you create one car anyway you got three persons you got two more people you can fill in yourself and it would be totally awesome to see this type of fiction from this point in the story after he got his revenge for the thing to occur and then go into the city where the game is going on cuz I can't pronounce the species and the text to speech keeps on trying to spell it as shiki instead of what it actually is and I forgot how to spell it anyway since he's got Batman's determination to beyond Master every technique ability his abilities and skills including combat strategy and skill in every field possible and the Tony Stark part of him will counter some of the rough edges on the Batman part of him but I still allowing him to put on the Batman like emotional mask that way the very core of his being he's laughing on the inside while on the outside he's being stern and scary like Batman and then Harry Potter creates a voice changer as well that use like 47 million layers you know voice change after voice change at the voice change while the last one the end product it sounds gravely except unlike Batman it also sounds extremely manly and almost constantly pissed off it's the point of the voice in the appearance is a scare opponents to make himself seem like in otherworldly dark avenging spirit God thing of course Batman didn't get everything so it look like a dark avenging spirit so I mean seriously everyone was so afraid of Batman that is very Shadow f****** scares him out of their mind they literally see the Shadow and they go nope maybe you can also hint that Harry Potter had a bunch of blocks and that receiving memories and skills and stuff from his past life completely negated all the damage that Dumbledore and ministry and his parents unintentionally done to him I'm just spitballing and trying to give you ideas to formulate the story because so far and these type of stories the main character is basically sitting back and just going twiddling his thumbs Harry Potter can't do that the very core his being is shaped into becoming savior / sword. Look Natalia from marvel comics she was a member of the red room the Red room was a Russian child soldier weapon program that brainwashed manipulated and broke the children repetitively over and over and over and over and over so the only thing they can be is a weapon slash tool for a wielder they also enhance the child but not too much enough so they can get the optimal fighting / assassin but not enough where they can't control that fighting assassin weapon tool Harry Potter went under not as refined version of that scenario well let's see Harry Potter lived in a heavily abusive environment in the books their children's books so 99% of the self that may have actually gone on is hidden they were yelling at him putting them inside of a very small hoverboard underneath the stairs sensory deprivation close environment dirty living conditions self-esteem self image destruction horrible habit habits that were instilled into him down to instinctual that prevent him from saying no to whoever that's their master it was implied in the original 10 copies that Vernon used to beat and torture Harry Potter and he is worked since he was a 3-year-old to cook to clean to sweep and mop and do the chores and laundry everything by hand wow the dursleys sat around and started calling him names and stuff treating him as if he was a piece of the furniture or an object to be used in thrown away when he did something that the displeased pissed him off I don't know him too much now on top of that he's brought into a magical environment where he is not being treated like worse than what s*** considers s*** that considers s*** he gobbled up the positive attention that was also used to hide the poison to make Harry Potter loyal both both metaphorically and literally some people have half theorized that Harry Potter was under a cocktail of different potions of different types including alchemical potions love potions loyalty potions anxiety potions potions to restrictus intelligence potions to restrict his intellect etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc these potions that are strict certain mental things is basically meant to be the eye blockers on horses that make it sounded the horses can only see in front of them so they're easyer to use as a workhorse or a pack mule or stage horse or a coach horse or whatever similar effects that literally make it impossible for Harry Potter to think for himself basically they plugged her remote control into Harry Potter's brain and chose all the options for him and made him go into directions and whatever way they wanted him to go into just like the Red room and their sleeper agent programming and thinks that reincarnation thingy for my suggestion all of that stuff has been purged from his system and he's given knowledge of relatively healthy people to remold himself into not a weapon tool but a warrior soldier saint savior wizard extraordinaire he still has the damage done to his psyche where he has a people saving thing except it's not a complete and total compulsion anymore where he jumps in head first this lettering and his ravenclaw and his Hufflepuff and his thousand other faces and aspects are now United and working in one single tandem thread mind aspect he's no longer a bunch of shards locked away in a box where he can't get to it a shortcut but retaining all the growth they got as shards but he is now whole instead of being a clear window it's more like those colored windows that you get in the church Harry Potter soul is the most badass soul there is the rarest soul ever it's basically like having a shiny Pokemon but a shiny limited edition super deluxe Pokemon who has extremely powerful stats and output in comparison to regular shiny Pokemon that's what Harry Potter sold looks like to the gods and the planet he's so unique and so beautiful and precious that even Alia won't touch his f****** s*** because she's like I don't want to accidentally damage him because he's so beautiful he'll just become some sort of dull Rock useless version of that rock where it can't be shaped or rot or even used to wear bashing because it would just like a sponge you can't even use it as a sponge because it won't act like a rock etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc.
The Wizard Ashikabi, Ch:1.05
After the point Harry Potter gets revenge in this fiction can you make a divergent point and create a second fiction where Harry Potter acts more like the ultimate tactician / detective and trains up his body his magical skills his abilities diversifies his abilities and consider 300% the perfect goal in every skill like Batman except able to use magic but then also have the gearhead like Tony Stark or the best part is in this ultimate version of this story have Harry Potter like trip and hit his head or something but exposed to some energy or something that causes a glitch to occur when the hollows trying to resurrect him that merges him with like five of his past lives and amalgam version of Batman taking the very best traits and very best abilities tools and capabilities of Batman amalgam Tony Stark taking the best abilities tools and stuff intelligence of Tony Stark give Harry Potter magic circuits and reality marvel that's filled with 50 reality marbles including shero emra's sword marble so that's three people so far and the reason why Mr emra couldn't access the other reality marvels is because the cursed fire burned out to connections in his soul so it had to redirect connections using only the strongest marble miracle thingy kind of like using several cars frames and like bending and twisting and reforging those frames until you create one car anyway you got three persons you got two more people you can fill in yourself and it would be totally awesome to see this type of fiction from this point in the story after he got his revenge for the thing to occur and then go into the city where the game is going on cuz I can't pronounce the species and the text to speech keeps on trying to spell it as shiki instead of what it actually is and I forgot how to spell it anyway since he's got Batman's determination to beyond Master every technique ability his abilities and skills including combat strategy and skill in every field possible and the Tony Stark part of him will counter some of the rough edges on the Batman part of him but I still allowing him to put on the Batman like emotional mask that way the very core of his being he's laughing on the inside while on the outside he's being stern and scary like Batman and then Harry Potter creates a voice changer as well that use like 47 million layers you know voice change after voice change at the voice change while the last one the end product it sounds gravely except unlike Batman it also sounds extremely manly and almost constantly pissed off it's the point of the voice in the appearance is a scare opponents to make himself seem like in otherworldly dark avenging spirit God thing of course Batman didn't get everything so it look like a dark avenging spirit so I mean seriously everyone was so afraid of Batman that is very Shadow f****** scares him out of their mind they literally see the Shadow and they go nope maybe you can also hint that Harry Potter had a bunch of blocks and that receiving memories and skills and stuff from his past life completely negated all the damage that Dumbledore and ministry and his parents unintentionally done to him I'm just spitballing and trying to give you ideas to formulate the story because so far and these type of stories the main character is basically sitting back and just going twiddling his thumbs Harry Potter can't do that the very core his being is shaped into becoming savior / sword. Look Natalia from marvel comics she was a member of the red room the Red room was a Russian child soldier weapon program that brainwashed manipulated and broke the children repetitively over and over and over and over and over so the only thing they can be is a weapon slash tool for a wielder they also enhance the child but not too much enough so they can get the optimal fighting / assassin but not enough where they can't control that fighting assassin weapon tool Harry Potter went under not as refined version of that scenario well let's see Harry Potter lived in a heavily abusive environment in the books their children's books so 99% of the self that may have actually gone on is hidden they were yelling at him putting them inside of a very small hoverboard underneath the stairs sensory deprivation close environment dirty living conditions self-esteem self image destruction horrible habit habits that were instilled into him down to instinctual that prevent him from saying no to whoever that's their master it was implied in the original 10 copies that Vernon used to beat and torture Harry Potter and he is worked since he was a 3-year-old to cook to clean to sweep and mop and do the chores and laundry everything by hand wow the dursleys sat around and started calling him names and stuff treating him as if he was a piece of the furniture or an object to be used in thrown away when he did something that the displeased pissed him off I don't know him too much now on top of that he's brought into a magical environment where he is not being treated like worse than what s*** considers s*** that considers s*** he gobbled up the positive attention that was also used to hide the poison to make Harry Potter loyal both both metaphorically and literally some people have half theorized that Harry Potter was under a cocktail of different potions of different types including alchemical potions love potions loyalty potions anxiety potions potions to restrictus intelligence potions to restrict his intellect etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc these potions that are strict certain mental things is basically meant to be the eye blockers on horses that make it sounded the horses can only see in front of them so they're easyer to use as a workhorse or a pack mule or stage horse or a coach horse or whatever similar effects that literally make it impossible for Harry Potter to think for himself basically they plugged her remote control into Harry Potter's brain and chose all the options for him and made him go into directions and whatever way they wanted him to go into just like the Red room and their sleeper agent programming and thinks that reincarnation thingy for my suggestion all of that stuff has been purged from his system and he's given knowledge of relatively healthy people to remold himself into not a weapon tool but a warrior soldier saint savior wizard extraordinaire he still has the damage done to his psyche where he has a people saving thing except it's not a complete and total compulsion anymore where he jumps in head first this lettering and his ravenclaw and his Hufflepuff and his thousand other faces and aspects are now United and working in one single tandem thread mind aspect he's no longer a bunch of shards locked away in a box where he can't get to it a shortcut but retaining all the growth they got as shards but he is now whole instead of being a clear window it's more like those colored windows that you get in the church Harry Potter soul is the most badass soul there is the rarest soul ever it's basically like having a shiny Pokemon but a shiny limited edition super deluxe Pokemon who has extremely powerful stats and output in comparison to regular shiny Pokemon that's what Harry Potter sold looks like to the gods and the planet he's so unique and so beautiful and precious that even Alia won't touch his f****** s*** because she's like I don't want to accidentally damage him because he's so beautiful he'll just become some sort of dull Rock useless version of that rock where it can't be shaped or rot or even used to wear bashing because it would just like a sponge you can't even use it as a sponge because it won't act like a rock etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc.
6/19/2022 c6 
1Fellbane
Despite its intended comedic effect, Miya’s attitude towards relationships never fails to irritate me. Why Harry allows her to act like that towards him when he already explained how he is now ‘married’ to his two Sekirei through magic and therefore would not be engaging in anything illicit is beyond my comprehension.
1FellbaneDespite its intended comedic effect, Miya’s attitude towards relationships never fails to irritate me. Why Harry allows her to act like that towards him when he already explained how he is now ‘married’ to his two Sekirei through magic and therefore would not be engaging in anything illicit is beyond my comprehension.
1/13/2022 c3 Lord.Raven6
i know that this stroy is old and unlikely to even be reading this but it has too many plotholes and cringe for me to keep reading, sorry.
i know that this stroy is old and unlikely to even be reading this but it has too many plotholes and cringe for me to keep reading, sorry.
12/2/2021 c11 HairyLimey
AGHHHHHHHH why oh why are the good ones abandoned!? (proceeds to beat head against wall) and on a border line cliffy! (returns to head butting wall)
AGHHHHHHHH why oh why are the good ones abandoned!? (proceeds to beat head against wall) and on a border line cliffy! (returns to head butting wall)