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12/2/2014 c4 7Myra the Dovahkiin
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
5/25/2012 c3 lava54321
please update soon i want to know what happens next
4/5/2012 c3 xXxOtAkU-444xXx
I like it! *^^*
3/3/2012 c2 xXxOtAkU-444xXx
I like it! *^^*
3/2/2012 c2 15GreyDog
Good story idea but, it needs to be fix and I do mean a lot of things. First of all, the title, it misleads the readers thinking Harry is Chance's son when it's actually Jake's. You can't have a summarization in a chapter, that should be added in the description if the story. Finally, separate your lines and action sequence because it will be a challenge for some readers to read or they'll just find it annoying and stop reading it in the next second. You have potential but you need to work on your writing skills.
3/2/2012 c1 3Antauri fan 4 ever
I thought it was time to! that and i love both of them!
2/29/2012 c1 77JFox101
Must read, must read, must read! It's about time someone else wrote a swatkatsHP XOVER!

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