for The Bond Between Brothers4/9/2015 c13 Guest
can't wait for more
can't wait for more
3/31/2015 c13 Reaver216
lol poor Raditz and Vegeta Nappa's going to make them wish he never came with them if that one chapter is anything to go by so please update soon i really like this story
lol poor Raditz and Vegeta Nappa's going to make them wish he never came with them if that one chapter is anything to go by so please update soon i really like this story
3/7/2015 c13 Guest
aw man it's so short please update soon with longer chapters
aw man it's so short please update soon with longer chapters
2/20/2015 c13 SeanHicks4
somewhat interesting plot idea, but I don't really agree with some of your decisions, like making S rank ninja on par with the higher ranked PTO member and putting more emphasis on chakra techniques. The amount of typos and spelling errors aint helping much either...
somewhat interesting plot idea, but I don't really agree with some of your decisions, like making S rank ninja on par with the higher ranked PTO member and putting more emphasis on chakra techniques. The amount of typos and spelling errors aint helping much either...
1/8/2015 c12 Guest
please update soon this is a really good story and i can,t wait for more naruto should become a saiyan somehow that would be good i know it's been don but i'm just saying
please update soon this is a really good story and i can,t wait for more naruto should become a saiyan somehow that would be good i know it's been don but i'm just saying
9/25/2014 c12 Reaver216
Come on man please update soon
Come on man please update soon
9/25/2014 c12 ArmCannos44
vegeta rember then bug plant vegete vegte vgetaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa then nappa dies
vegeta rember then bug plant vegete vegte vgetaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa then nappa dies
9/8/2014 c12 Reaver216
Please update soon I really want to know what happens next
Please update soon I really want to know what happens next
9/3/2014 c12 Reaver216
Please update soon I really like this story and I want to see more
Please update soon I really like this story and I want to see more
9/1/2014 c12 Guest
Please update soon
Please update soon
8/30/2014 c12 Korra Senju
very good fic. i got sucked right into it. nice touch with the fourth wall, that's always good for me. now, is danzo gonna die? please tell me that he will
very good fic. i got sucked right into it. nice touch with the fourth wall, that's always good for me. now, is danzo gonna die? please tell me that he will
8/23/2014 c12 Guest
Please update this is awsome
Please update this is awsome
6/17/2014 c9 Okami Princess
Hey, did you hear? Goku's (who who is also Raditz's) mother has been revealed by Akira Toriyama! In the manga short he made, called Dragonball Minus, we meet Gine! She's such a cutie, and you can just feel the love between her and Bardock in that story! I can see quite a bit of her in Gohan as a kid, specially the hairdo. Go look her up on the wiki!
Hey, did you hear? Goku's (who who is also Raditz's) mother has been revealed by Akira Toriyama! In the manga short he made, called Dragonball Minus, we meet Gine! She's such a cutie, and you can just feel the love between her and Bardock in that story! I can see quite a bit of her in Gohan as a kid, specially the hairdo. Go look her up on the wiki!