for Phase Change1/30/2020 c1 
13Meirelle
Is it sad that the first thing I thought was, "Yay! Tali doesn't have to crawl into the vents at the collector base anymore!"
13MeirelleIs it sad that the first thing I thought was, "Yay! Tali doesn't have to crawl into the vents at the collector base anymore!"
10/23/2015 c1 Guest
screw the healing augments I got the heavy machine gun and wasted Namir
screw the healing augments I got the heavy machine gun and wasted Namir
8/7/2015 c1 Guest
I hoped nyou would continue this story but I guess not to bad I really liked this story
I hoped nyou would continue this story but I guess not to bad I really liked this story
11/10/2014 c1 Lolmon725
Fucking beautiful.
Fucking beautiful.
6/16/2013 c1 ThatBrutalReviewer
Love it. Expertly well written in my opinion and even though unlikely you could make a full length story out of it, that I would definitely read.
Love it. Expertly well written in my opinion and even though unlikely you could make a full length story out of it, that I would definitely read.
5/13/2013 c1 13Have a Little Feith
I really hope this gets continued, and shows the date with Shepard. This was pretty good. The problem with the mobile site, though, is that you can't tell if a story is marked as complete.
13Have a Little FeithI really hope this gets continued, and shows the date with Shepard. This was pretty good. The problem with the mobile site, though, is that you can't tell if a story is marked as complete.
7/30/2012 c1 tremerid
Nicely done author-person!
There were a few minor glitches, spots where you missed a word after a "To" in a sentence, but other than that, the story flowed well, and I liked your characterization of Jensen and Shep. Really kinda wished it was more than a one-shot, but then again, it was a 9k one-shot and that has a shininess all its own. _
Keep it up, and post stories when they strike your fancy.
Regards,
-Tremerid
Nicely done author-person!
There were a few minor glitches, spots where you missed a word after a "To" in a sentence, but other than that, the story flowed well, and I liked your characterization of Jensen and Shep. Really kinda wished it was more than a one-shot, but then again, it was a 9k one-shot and that has a shininess all its own. _
Keep it up, and post stories when they strike your fancy.
Regards,
-Tremerid
3/13/2012 c1 MechaBlastoise
I enjoyed this alot. It was very well written and in character. I would love to see a multi chapter story using this premise.
I enjoyed this alot. It was very well written and in character. I would love to see a multi chapter story using this premise.