for A DESPERATE PLEADING NIGHT7/29/2013 c1 Guest
horrible story, bulma sounds like a cheap whore.
horrible story, bulma sounds like a cheap whore.
5/29/2012 c1 Forgotten love
I thought this was a good fic but it could have been better.
I thought this was a good fic but it could have been better.
5/26/2012 c1 Yvonne
Again good story but the grammar made it a little hard to understand. Overall very good
Again good story but the grammar made it a little hard to understand. Overall very good
3/6/2012 c1 
2Patched-up Matryoshka
Just...no. Did you just fling whatever grammar skills you learned in school out the window?
2Patched-up MatryoshkaJust...no. Did you just fling whatever grammar skills you learned in school out the window?