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11/28/2019 c81 8LWJ2
Oh, very nicely done. Of note, linguistically Cornish and Breton are related. Thanks for sharing with us.
11/28/2019 c51 RWIW
Very interesting.
11/28/2019 c52 RWIW
Is... this a Dr. Who crossover or something? It seems like an interesting premise, I just don't have the context...

Oh, Babylon 5? Now I really don't have context. Maybe this is the push I need to watch it?
11/28/2019 c53 RWIW
Unlike most of the self-contained stories here, this feels like an inadequate oneshot and a great start to a multi-chapter story. Would have to move it back to Hogwarts years for maximum drama (Harry finally gets off his rear and goes to see Godric's Hollow, etc.), but would be fine even without it. Lily and James would be apoplectic at learning about Harry's many sufferings...
11/28/2019 c54 RWIW
...brilliant.
11/28/2019 c56 RWIW
What is wrong with you? In a good way.
11/28/2019 c57 RWIW
A crazy and yet oddly interesting idea. I wonder if Tom Riddle was the prior Chosen One? He was, after all, around the right time to be a Chosen One in opposition to Dumbledore...
11/28/2019 c58 RWIW
...That's bad and you should feel bad. *applauds*
11/28/2019 c61 RWIW
Hahaha! That's one of my favorite versions of 'Dumbledore is the Dark Lord of the prophecy'...
11/28/2019 c65 RWIW
Ouch. That's a brilliant new way to Ron-bash. I'm halfway surprised the wider body of HP fanfiction hadn't popularized that with Malfoy (or Crabbe/Goyle) first. :)
11/28/2019 c66 RWIW
An alternate ending:

Albus, feeling quite odd, turned to the speaker. "Yes, in fact," he said. Now that the strange feeling had passed, he had recovered his courage. In fact, he felt better than he had in a long time. "As I am sure you are well aware, Harry."

[I'M NOT HARRY.]

"You aren't?"

A pause. [I THINK LOOKING DOWN WOULD DO YOU GOOD.]

Albus looked down, and almost jumped. There was a body at his feet. It looked quite dead. Had the ritual taken the life of some poor innocent as a price?

Then he examined it a bit more. Heavens. That body looked quite familiar. In fact...

"I see," he murmured. "No man may summon Death without... why, meeting Death. Is that the case?"

[NO, ACTUALLY.] Death sounded almost apologetic. [YOU WERE QUITE ALIVE. IT WAS YOUR OLD HEART THAT COULDN'T TAKE THE SHOCK.]

Albus looked down at his corpse, feeling quite miffed. He could have had the honor of meeting Death and coming away alive? He indulged in self-pity a few moments longer, then sighed. There was no use crying over spilled milk. "Very well," he said, extending his hand. "Off to the next great adventure, then?"
11/28/2019 c68 RWIW
That pun is horrific and you should feel bad.

Not too bad, though. It was pretty good. But good GAD, that pun.
11/28/2019 c70 RWIW
*cocks head* The HBP book was DUMBLEDORE'S Horcrux? Well, that did explain why everyone around it got dumber.

Nicely done. Original, too - see, original ideas DO still exist in this fandom! Bit like Snorkacks, but they DO exist, they do...
11/28/2019 c74 RWIW
Aberforth's revenge!

Nice one. I liked this. :D Harry the Super!Legilimens deals out instant karma to all who assault him! Couldn't happen to nicer people.
5/22/2019 c80 Hands Off MY Wolfie
That was fun and plausible. Neville overpowering a wand he had won. Yaa! Neville

Too bad the 'leavings' did not slap Fudge in the face [wake-up call].

Thanks for sharing.
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