for The Legend of Gaia's Sennin3/5/2021 c37 Re Lovely Lover
Yeah this was definitely a good chapter but that materia part was really annoying.
He knows Sephiroth is around and that he wants the materia. Knows he could attack at anytime. Casually or all out since its what he needs. But after Naruto gets it. Instead of sealing it up and being on guard. Prepping to vanish and hide the scroll so it wont be found or something. He just holds it in his hand casually walking out and having a conversation with the others up until and after Sephiroth shows up. Handicapped with the damned materia in one hand.
THAT just came off as forced.
As a side note since its it's been too long and I can't remember. Doesnt Naruto still have his clones? At least with one of those crappy materia? If so I dont see how he could be stumped at a solution for getting the materia. Him having clones should be ingrained in his mind as a potential solution.
Anyway those are the only negatives I see in this chapter. Otherwise great work.
Yeah this was definitely a good chapter but that materia part was really annoying.
He knows Sephiroth is around and that he wants the materia. Knows he could attack at anytime. Casually or all out since its what he needs. But after Naruto gets it. Instead of sealing it up and being on guard. Prepping to vanish and hide the scroll so it wont be found or something. He just holds it in his hand casually walking out and having a conversation with the others up until and after Sephiroth shows up. Handicapped with the damned materia in one hand.
THAT just came off as forced.
As a side note since its it's been too long and I can't remember. Doesnt Naruto still have his clones? At least with one of those crappy materia? If so I dont see how he could be stumped at a solution for getting the materia. Him having clones should be ingrained in his mind as a potential solution.
Anyway those are the only negatives I see in this chapter. Otherwise great work.
3/5/2021 c37 codywhite162
This was another amazing chapter from this story! This is really my absolute favorite thing to read on this website and I really am looking forward to the next chapter whenever that comes out!
This was another amazing chapter from this story! This is really my absolute favorite thing to read on this website and I really am looking forward to the next chapter whenever that comes out!
3/5/2021 c37 
6Zane Tribal Tyne Alexandros
You better not kill Aerith bro. You better not! I don’t thank my heart could take it! That scene was the first time I ever bawled like a baby because of the video game...
6Zane Tribal Tyne AlexandrosYou better not kill Aerith bro. You better not! I don’t thank my heart could take it! That scene was the first time I ever bawled like a baby because of the video game...
3/5/2021 c37 2dextron11
This chapter felt better than the previous one did. It was nice to see Naruto summon someone other than Shiva. I have been worried that Naruto isn’t really progressing in this story. He may have grown on a personal level, but he doesn’t seem to be getting more powerful. It would be nice to see him gain another materia slot or reduce his chakra cost. However, actually using the summons he has been collecting like baseball cards is good progress on that front.
One note on continuity. Jessie is alive in this story. You had Naruto save her life and leave her with Elmyra back in Midgar.
2dextron11This chapter felt better than the previous one did. It was nice to see Naruto summon someone other than Shiva. I have been worried that Naruto isn’t really progressing in this story. He may have grown on a personal level, but he doesn’t seem to be getting more powerful. It would be nice to see him gain another materia slot or reduce his chakra cost. However, actually using the summons he has been collecting like baseball cards is good progress on that front.
One note on continuity. Jessie is alive in this story. You had Naruto save her life and leave her with Elmyra back in Midgar.
3/5/2021 c37 2Hisoka316
A pleasant surprise as always, I will forever love this story. So thank you for continuing the story despite the success of your books.
2Hisoka316A pleasant surprise as always, I will forever love this story. So thank you for continuing the story despite the success of your books.
3/3/2021 c3 RyofuHosen
To be franc I was interested in the story and found it interesting the way you implemented Naruto's ability into the story, but now I will stop reading.
Having Sasuke in the story completely ruin it for me, it's like having a second MC destroying the feeling of having the MC being "Unique". Then what? have Obito and Madara as well? no thanks, the moment you implemented someone else from the world of Naruto you made the story bland and non interesting.
To be franc I was interested in the story and found it interesting the way you implemented Naruto's ability into the story, but now I will stop reading.
Having Sasuke in the story completely ruin it for me, it's like having a second MC destroying the feeling of having the MC being "Unique". Then what? have Obito and Madara as well? no thanks, the moment you implemented someone else from the world of Naruto you made the story bland and non interesting.
3/3/2021 c6 2mc.zero
I believe that the Silmarillion in elvish would be easier to read than this recreation of the first mission at FF7...
2mc.zeroI believe that the Silmarillion in elvish would be easier to read than this recreation of the first mission at FF7...
3/1/2021 c36 codywhite162
Really loved this chapter and am looking forward to the next update for it! This is one of my all time favorite stories!
Really loved this chapter and am looking forward to the next update for it! This is one of my all time favorite stories!