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1/7/2020 c4 SLay KinG
SASUKE BEING IN A STORY WHERE HE CLEARLY DOESN'T BELONG IS OVERUSED AND OVERRATED...AND THAT LEADS TO THE SAME CLICHE STORY TELLING YOU SOUND ARROGANT IN YOU'RE AUTHORS NOTE...
1/7/2020 c1 SLay KinG
AGHHHHH...why are we nerfying him DAMMIT!...WHY GIVE HIM SO MANY ABILITIES ONLY TO SUCKER PUNCH HIM IN THE FACE BY LIMITING EVERYTHING AND GIVING HIM DUMB CONDITIONS
10/28/2019 c2 Mangoose
Wait, a non-OP Naruto that's actually clever? Sign me up!
10/26/2019 c22 Energizing Entry
I thought zetsu was made by kaguya not tobi
10/24/2019 c3 Kuman
This was going so good. Until you had to bring that emo bastard. Why oh why would you bring that shithead in a crossover?
9/27/2019 c35 34Adventreader221
When 8s the next phase gonna be. I miss this story. also will Aerirth gonna get pregnant cuz she hasn't used a birth control pill nor has Naruto wore a condom when they did the deed any of those time
9/20/2019 c3 I-Nex-I
Why did he waste time having sex with Laila if he had the memory replacement jutsu all along? I get getting to know her so he had more info and knew how to act more like her, but that sex seemed like pointless and dumb fan service honestly
9/20/2019 c1 I-Nex-I
I don’t really get your explanation for the Materia. You realize that all jutsu require some amount of shape manipulation, right?
7/16/2019 c3 Sypho Dias
Wtf just happened... that wasn't the emo bastard was it? Fuck...
7/16/2019 c1 Sypho Dias
Oh come on! Are you trying to nerf naruto or make him stronger! I can never tell... why can he only use one at a time!? That's just ridiculous!
7/11/2019 c31 Czar Joseph
Sorry, wrong chapter in this.

ROADA ROLLA DA! (Road Roller Da!)
7/4/2019 c35 IYeetedEverythingIWroteHere
Holy shit this is good. I found it this morning and binged it during 4th of July. Probably not the best use of a holiday... jk.
7/1/2019 c35 Guest
Earlier chapter I mentioned hoping the story would go Naruto/Aerith/Cissnei/Yuffie.

Reading Yuffie annoy Vincent I got the feeling the author was considering Yuffie "fangirl" (though for naruto) and Vincent the "brooder" and is considering matching the two. : /

I have nothing against Vincent I will say though.
7/1/2019 c35 Guest
It's fine." Naruto continued his sawing actions as he fondled her breast. "I put our tent further away from everyone else. So long as we keep quiet, I'm sure no one will hear us

maybe I'm remembering a different story but didnt he use silencing seals during the gender bending event to keep the women's screaming from being heard by the guards?

I'm sure he could not be using it due to being cautious of an attack but there were other times it could be used. Then again theres the perimeter he set up before when he caught yuffie as well that he could do.

I'm wondering I'd the author simply forgot due to time length between chapters or perhaps just for the awkward scenes.
7/1/2019 c35 Guest
There were no cities this far out, which naturally meant they hadn't been able to stay at an inn or even find a bathhouse to wash themselves. Regardless of what Aerith said, all of them smelled rank

This was something I thought about earlier. He could easily make a bath for everyone. Earth to make a pit, water to fill and fire to warm.

Hell he could even create compressed earth and for a pit under to heat the base and cook it. Even use a little lava underneath. Though with the cost this story has that might be a bit much woth the lava.
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