for The Legend of Gaia's Sennin6/30/2019 c9 Guest
So yet ANOTHER handicap with the chakra costs too? Hes gotta be damned weak in comparison to normal now. Theres been nothing on him talking to kurama so either hes out cold, in a summoning materia or stripped from him entirely.
Either way for sure he would have his ass handed to him with ease now from stronger opponents and not just sephiroth with all these handicaps unless he ends up able to use his biju cloak.
So yet ANOTHER handicap with the chakra costs too? Hes gotta be damned weak in comparison to normal now. Theres been nothing on him talking to kurama so either hes out cold, in a summoning materia or stripped from him entirely.
Either way for sure he would have his ass handed to him with ease now from stronger opponents and not just sephiroth with all these handicaps unless he ends up able to use his biju cloak.
6/30/2019 c8 Guest
Enjoying the story so far myself. Still bummed by the severe handicap though.
Enjoying the story so far myself. Still bummed by the severe handicap though.
6/29/2019 c6 Guest
The whole peaceful days coming to an end comment. Making me remember she dies disc damn 1. Of course no one ever goes back at any point to speak to her adoptive mother.
Also reminds me of the bastard during the crossdressing event that sends everyone through the trap door into the sewers. If I remember right no one ever ends up dealing with the bastard and he continues his scummy ways.
I'm hoping I'd the story has the crossdressing event that if he "falls" for the pit. It has him grabbing everyone and wall walking them back up and ending the bastard. Leaving them with plenty of time to save the others in avalanche from dying and if not stopping the plates drop. At least getting as many people out as possible before it does. Though I doubt there will be time to do so for any on the upper plate.
Since this story decided to remove his ability to use thousands of clones as if it hasnt handicapped him enough.
The whole peaceful days coming to an end comment. Making me remember she dies disc damn 1. Of course no one ever goes back at any point to speak to her adoptive mother.
Also reminds me of the bastard during the crossdressing event that sends everyone through the trap door into the sewers. If I remember right no one ever ends up dealing with the bastard and he continues his scummy ways.
I'm hoping I'd the story has the crossdressing event that if he "falls" for the pit. It has him grabbing everyone and wall walking them back up and ending the bastard. Leaving them with plenty of time to save the others in avalanche from dying and if not stopping the plates drop. At least getting as many people out as possible before it does. Though I doubt there will be time to do so for any on the upper plate.
Since this story decided to remove his ability to use thousands of clones as if it hasnt handicapped him enough.
6/29/2019 c4 Guest
I think it would be interesting if he kept his abilities but the planet copied them, manifesting materia from his body. They'd need to be used and gather strength to fully draw out their use of the knowledge inside them to be mastered and manifest a copy but it would allow him to allow another in this case series to use his abilities.
I think I remember advent children having the enemy character using more than one materia within their arm. I was thinking perhaps that could be a thing if it's one they've mastered allowing direct use without equipment.
I think it would be interesting if he kept his abilities but the planet copied them, manifesting materia from his body. They'd need to be used and gather strength to fully draw out their use of the knowledge inside them to be mastered and manifest a copy but it would allow him to allow another in this case series to use his abilities.
I think I remember advent children having the enemy character using more than one materia within their arm. I was thinking perhaps that could be a thing if it's one they've mastered allowing direct use without equipment.
6/29/2019 c1 Guest
Why?
First off why does him being shifted from one world to the other somehow alter his physical being completely altering him into a gain? As if some all mighty God of that universe has a universal law in effect that all existences can only exist a certain way.
Second, just one materia? Despite originally being a part of him he can only use one at a time. If that's not bad and screwed up enough he cant even equip the others on equipment like everyone else thus handicapping him even further? What the hell for.
Finally what's with the back story? Hes not strong enough to deal with the war and it went on and on but he had the time to train in several combination elements including Dust. Which by the way is an advanced combination of 3 elements instead if 2 like the others listed. What the heck?
Why?
First off why does him being shifted from one world to the other somehow alter his physical being completely altering him into a gain? As if some all mighty God of that universe has a universal law in effect that all existences can only exist a certain way.
Second, just one materia? Despite originally being a part of him he can only use one at a time. If that's not bad and screwed up enough he cant even equip the others on equipment like everyone else thus handicapping him even further? What the hell for.
Finally what's with the back story? Hes not strong enough to deal with the war and it went on and on but he had the time to train in several combination elements including Dust. Which by the way is an advanced combination of 3 elements instead if 2 like the others listed. What the heck?
6/20/2019 c1 NazgulBelserion
I remember now why Im not interested in this it was cause you added Sasuke to this god I hate that character ppl always add him to damn crossovers why can't he just be left in the elemental nation's and fuck off noo they have to always bring him to be annoying
I remember now why Im not interested in this it was cause you added Sasuke to this god I hate that character ppl always add him to damn crossovers why can't he just be left in the elemental nation's and fuck off noo they have to always bring him to be annoying
6/11/2019 c35 
4reaver216
This is an awesome story but there are some things that need fixed on several chapters that if you were to read your story you will see what I am talking about as there were many also you kept flipping back and forth calling Red XIII a feline and canine as I'm not sure whether or not the game ever said what he was as it has been a long time since I played it but I think you should choose one and keep with it and just as a suggestion maybe you could use his real name but I understand if you don't as by this time in their journey they are probably used to calling him Red XIII so it's not a big deal. I hope you keep going with this story as it is in my humble opinion an epic story
4reaver216This is an awesome story but there are some things that need fixed on several chapters that if you were to read your story you will see what I am talking about as there were many also you kept flipping back and forth calling Red XIII a feline and canine as I'm not sure whether or not the game ever said what he was as it has been a long time since I played it but I think you should choose one and keep with it and just as a suggestion maybe you could use his real name but I understand if you don't as by this time in their journey they are probably used to calling him Red XIII so it's not a big deal. I hope you keep going with this story as it is in my humble opinion an epic story
5/10/2019 c1 Guest
Type your review a useless naruto one for each ability if sasuke is in this naruto is a loser a useless piss of shit
Type your review a useless naruto one for each ability if sasuke is in this naruto is a loser a useless piss of shit
3/31/2019 c1 Guest
Not gonna lie the whole material set up is stupid. He should have just kept his normal abilities, way less to focus on and he’s still OP.
Not gonna lie the whole material set up is stupid. He should have just kept his normal abilities, way less to focus on and he’s still OP.
3/30/2019 c1 Guest
why did you give Naruto more techniques/jutsu? he's already OP as is, why give him more. it just makes it harder to incorporate all of those different skills into fights and the story in general.
why did you give Naruto more techniques/jutsu? he's already OP as is, why give him more. it just makes it harder to incorporate all of those different skills into fights and the story in general.
3/29/2019 c31 Czar Joseph
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ROADA ROLLA DA! (Road Roller Da!)
3/9/2019 c2 1ISleep
I mean.. He's a veteran at war, the strongest and the best in his world, has bijuu in him and can use mokuton... So why he use Kage Bushin for two punks, when he could've easily beat them himself, even if they hit him it wouldn't do jack (he could likely take a punch from Lee and be mostly fine. Lee's punches destroys stone walls easy.)
1ISleepI mean.. He's a veteran at war, the strongest and the best in his world, has bijuu in him and can use mokuton... So why he use Kage Bushin for two punks, when he could've easily beat them himself, even if they hit him it wouldn't do jack (he could likely take a punch from Lee and be mostly fine. Lee's punches destroys stone walls easy.)
2/27/2019 c27 Guest
Great chapter...and at least we know what a drunk Aerith looks like good job.
Great chapter...and at least we know what a drunk Aerith looks like good job.