
2/20/2019 c1 xSean
100 Chapters you estimated. Been a while since I have read this but your still a long ways off the mark. Personally I would prefer you updating this over the DxD crossover but what the heck, hopefully you come back to it.
100 Chapters you estimated. Been a while since I have read this but your still a long ways off the mark. Personally I would prefer you updating this over the DxD crossover but what the heck, hopefully you come back to it.
2/3/2019 c1 Guest
I love how you referrenced Zack from final fantasy VII Crisis Core, it seems like nobody knows who he is. Lowkey my favorite character.
I love how you referrenced Zack from final fantasy VII Crisis Core, it seems like nobody knows who he is. Lowkey my favorite character.
12/6/2018 c1 TheOneWhoSeeksTheStars
Please men, I followed this fic from the past year, don't abandon this story
please men, was very original..
Please men, I followed this fic from the past year, don't abandon this story
please men, was very original..
11/14/2018 c35
6BloodySS2God
This is easily the BEST Naruto FF7 story I have ever read. Your writing is very engaging and quite detailed which I really like. The character interaction by far is my favourite thing about this story tho. Just so intriguing. I am also curious about Sasuke since we haven't seen him in a bit. Wonder what you have planned for him. Cant wait for the next chapter! Hope you update soon :)
Have a good day!

This is easily the BEST Naruto FF7 story I have ever read. Your writing is very engaging and quite detailed which I really like. The character interaction by far is my favourite thing about this story tho. Just so intriguing. I am also curious about Sasuke since we haven't seen him in a bit. Wonder what you have planned for him. Cant wait for the next chapter! Hope you update soon :)
Have a good day!
11/2/2018 c15
18Luciendar
Don't worry, I respect your stupid decisions...I meant your stupid decisions...I can't quit putting stupid in there...oh well.
sorry that was just too funny of a thought not to leave.
Also, I'm not really sure what your reasoning is, but we're talking about someone who battled through the fourth shinobi war. The most powerful of shinobi. And now he's just a pretty good fighter. I mean...sigh

Don't worry, I respect your stupid decisions...I meant your stupid decisions...I can't quit putting stupid in there...oh well.
sorry that was just too funny of a thought not to leave.
Also, I'm not really sure what your reasoning is, but we're talking about someone who battled through the fourth shinobi war. The most powerful of shinobi. And now he's just a pretty good fighter. I mean...sigh
11/2/2018 c12 Luciendar
I find the idea that Naruto would have witnessed things like that to be very realistic. Just not something that would be discussed in a family friendly tv show. I did, however, find your fight scene to unbelievable for words. Okay, Naruto hasn't had any MAJOR fights for a year. He has been sparring with his clones hardcore. Not to mention the fact that no one outside of SOLDIER should even be able to stand after a blow from him, even if they somehow blocked his incredible speed.
I find the idea that Naruto would have witnessed things like that to be very realistic. Just not something that would be discussed in a family friendly tv show. I did, however, find your fight scene to unbelievable for words. Okay, Naruto hasn't had any MAJOR fights for a year. He has been sparring with his clones hardcore. Not to mention the fact that no one outside of SOLDIER should even be able to stand after a blow from him, even if they somehow blocked his incredible speed.
11/2/2018 c8 Luciendar
I find it amusing that you call people idiots who say something wasn't 'what they wanted to read' I mean, that's what reviews are for. For readers to express opinions on a story. If you don't care about the opinions of other on what you write, why would you even post them. The fact that you do post them clearly means you care, and that you want positive feedback. The fact that you felt the need to vent that in your authors note shows how much it actually does bother you as well. If it didn't you would have just ignored it and gone on, not giving it a second thought. That's a fact.
To be fair, I think people who call people idiots over expressing an honest and non-offensive opinion are the real idiots. I hate people who simply flame for no reason though, just wanted to add that last part.
I find it amusing that you call people idiots who say something wasn't 'what they wanted to read' I mean, that's what reviews are for. For readers to express opinions on a story. If you don't care about the opinions of other on what you write, why would you even post them. The fact that you do post them clearly means you care, and that you want positive feedback. The fact that you felt the need to vent that in your authors note shows how much it actually does bother you as well. If it didn't you would have just ignored it and gone on, not giving it a second thought. That's a fact.
To be fair, I think people who call people idiots over expressing an honest and non-offensive opinion are the real idiots. I hate people who simply flame for no reason though, just wanted to add that last part.
11/2/2018 c4 Luciendar
I fully understand your authors note at the end of this chapter, but as one of the people who disliked Sasuke being in the story, I feel it is my duty to defend that opinion to some degree. Now, I'm not debating the fact that this is your story or anything like that so you call the shots. Of course, when people read a cross-over there is no limit to the amount of details you can pull from each world. That being said, when many of us read the summary that you posted for this story, I believe that we, or at least I, was looking forward to a story that revolved around Naruto dealing with the world of Final Fantasy 7. Bringing in Sasuke deviates the attention.
To be honest, it's already kind of annoying how little power you are letting Naruto display, but that I'm sure you'll expand on later. Or at least I hope.
See, what we are hoping to see is how Naruto deals with Sephiroth and Shinra. That kind of stuff. If we wanted to read about Naruto fighting Sasuke, then we could have read any of the thousand some stories that are posted about it in the Naruto section. You don't seem to register that. I'm not saying that your story will be bad. You seem to be a talented writer, if a bit overly detail oriented. I'm just tired of Sasuke, and chidori, and the sharingan and didn't want those to be the issues Naruto faced in this world. I hope that this helps you understand our, or at least me, trepidation on the matter.
I fully understand your authors note at the end of this chapter, but as one of the people who disliked Sasuke being in the story, I feel it is my duty to defend that opinion to some degree. Now, I'm not debating the fact that this is your story or anything like that so you call the shots. Of course, when people read a cross-over there is no limit to the amount of details you can pull from each world. That being said, when many of us read the summary that you posted for this story, I believe that we, or at least I, was looking forward to a story that revolved around Naruto dealing with the world of Final Fantasy 7. Bringing in Sasuke deviates the attention.
To be honest, it's already kind of annoying how little power you are letting Naruto display, but that I'm sure you'll expand on later. Or at least I hope.
See, what we are hoping to see is how Naruto deals with Sephiroth and Shinra. That kind of stuff. If we wanted to read about Naruto fighting Sasuke, then we could have read any of the thousand some stories that are posted about it in the Naruto section. You don't seem to register that. I'm not saying that your story will be bad. You seem to be a talented writer, if a bit overly detail oriented. I'm just tired of Sasuke, and chidori, and the sharingan and didn't want those to be the issues Naruto faced in this world. I hope that this helps you understand our, or at least me, trepidation on the matter.
11/2/2018 c3 Luciendar
I was really hoping that there wouldn't be other characters from Naruto in this story. But I guess Sasuke just showed up. That completely ruin this story for me. Damn it.
I was really hoping that there wouldn't be other characters from Naruto in this story. But I guess Sasuke just showed up. That completely ruin this story for me. Damn it.
9/15/2018 c23
1JadeDragon100
The entire time with the desert section I was just reading it in slight confusion, especially when it was confirmed what area it was supposed to be with the chocobo ranch and dead ‘worm’ on the other side; thanks to that I was constantly trying to figure out why it wasn’t the usual swamp area; when you explained at the bottom though it at least made sense; now as for the story in general, I’m still loving it. I started reading it a while back and have been on and off it considering it’s size. Good grammar almost always, two franchises that I honestly love we’re put together exactly how I hoped to find one as, and dang it I’m too excited for narutos meetings with sephiroth and Sasuke (though the whole amnesia for Sasuke thing is definitely frustrating, even if I see the reasoning behind it) so yeah, lovely story, best crossover of these series I’ve found yet, and definitely plan to continue reading this to the newest chapter.

The entire time with the desert section I was just reading it in slight confusion, especially when it was confirmed what area it was supposed to be with the chocobo ranch and dead ‘worm’ on the other side; thanks to that I was constantly trying to figure out why it wasn’t the usual swamp area; when you explained at the bottom though it at least made sense; now as for the story in general, I’m still loving it. I started reading it a while back and have been on and off it considering it’s size. Good grammar almost always, two franchises that I honestly love we’re put together exactly how I hoped to find one as, and dang it I’m too excited for narutos meetings with sephiroth and Sasuke (though the whole amnesia for Sasuke thing is definitely frustrating, even if I see the reasoning behind it) so yeah, lovely story, best crossover of these series I’ve found yet, and definitely plan to continue reading this to the newest chapter.
8/25/2018 c12 Mythiggy
Reading your stories again because they're so enjoyable. I have to say that I've noticed that in those stories that Naruto is xovered into another setting he is also under the trope of "Worf has the Flu".
Something always interferes with his ability to fight so that he cannot use his Post!War abilities. This, of course, allows the story to progress in its original format. That's not to say that there isn't curbstomping but never where it would truly affect the story.
Is this just so that you can preserve the storyline and have a guide to follow? Nonetheless I like this story. And will read it again. And again when I find myself missing it.
Hope that your original series is doing well. Thumbs up.
Reading your stories again because they're so enjoyable. I have to say that I've noticed that in those stories that Naruto is xovered into another setting he is also under the trope of "Worf has the Flu".
Something always interferes with his ability to fight so that he cannot use his Post!War abilities. This, of course, allows the story to progress in its original format. That's not to say that there isn't curbstomping but never where it would truly affect the story.
Is this just so that you can preserve the storyline and have a guide to follow? Nonetheless I like this story. And will read it again. And again when I find myself missing it.
Hope that your original series is doing well. Thumbs up.
7/22/2018 c4 KakeruPB
I have question which is probably common for you but where is Kurama? I miss that giant ball of fluff.
I have question which is probably common for you but where is Kurama? I miss that giant ball of fluff.