for The Legend of Gaia's Sennin1/17/2018 c1 AsbelLhant
What a load of bull, Naruto's abilities became materias. Nice job making him consume twice or more needed chakra for jutsus. Pathetic, Naruto should have been more powerful than them. Duh, Bijuu and other stuff. I mean why made him able to use healing jutsu if he can't even annihilate Aerith's capturers. What's the point in having him sent in Midgar with a 4th Ninja War version of him if some idiot can just outsmart him or just made him an overall idiot. Seriously, plot holes how the fuck did they get Aerith when you specifically sent a clone to her when helping Mylene. Dude, you have serious problems organizing and remembering things you wrote. Heck why not just allow Naruto give his other materia to others? No point in him keeping them if they are materia which others should and can use anyways.
What a load of bull, Naruto's abilities became materias. Nice job making him consume twice or more needed chakra for jutsus. Pathetic, Naruto should have been more powerful than them. Duh, Bijuu and other stuff. I mean why made him able to use healing jutsu if he can't even annihilate Aerith's capturers. What's the point in having him sent in Midgar with a 4th Ninja War version of him if some idiot can just outsmart him or just made him an overall idiot. Seriously, plot holes how the fuck did they get Aerith when you specifically sent a clone to her when helping Mylene. Dude, you have serious problems organizing and remembering things you wrote. Heck why not just allow Naruto give his other materia to others? No point in him keeping them if they are materia which others should and can use anyways.
1/9/2018 c17 Squarekiddo
The reason this story isnt that good is because its all rehashed canon, the first chapters were the best ones because that was actually original, and it has a very childish view on romance, and the romance is preditable to the level that we know whats happening before reading it, I could easily know that their first kiss of example would happen after he resucued her from Shinra, even before she was even kidnapped. And the 2-5 paragraphs explaining how awesome the kiss was, seriously its a kiss, why overplay it so heavily, their not teens, I dont really understand why they are acting like young teens, in fact I hate teens, Why would I want to read about it. And now, I dont really have to read the story anymore... Ive played the game 5 times, I know the story, I just have to imagine a Naruto in there that DOES NOTHING AT ALL to derail canon, because you handcuff him with all sorts of reasons all the time, many times they dont even make much sense, its like you made Naruto to strong, and realized later on he needed to be weaker in order to dry hump the canon story.
But I gave this a shot, even after the rehashed canon material got in, but I simply cant do it anymore, its boring, I know this already, it reads like subpar Novelization of FF7
The reason this story isnt that good is because its all rehashed canon, the first chapters were the best ones because that was actually original, and it has a very childish view on romance, and the romance is preditable to the level that we know whats happening before reading it, I could easily know that their first kiss of example would happen after he resucued her from Shinra, even before she was even kidnapped. And the 2-5 paragraphs explaining how awesome the kiss was, seriously its a kiss, why overplay it so heavily, their not teens, I dont really understand why they are acting like young teens, in fact I hate teens, Why would I want to read about it. And now, I dont really have to read the story anymore... Ive played the game 5 times, I know the story, I just have to imagine a Naruto in there that DOES NOTHING AT ALL to derail canon, because you handcuff him with all sorts of reasons all the time, many times they dont even make much sense, its like you made Naruto to strong, and realized later on he needed to be weaker in order to dry hump the canon story.
But I gave this a shot, even after the rehashed canon material got in, but I simply cant do it anymore, its boring, I know this already, it reads like subpar Novelization of FF7
12/17/2017 c2 inabikarikuro
WTF THERE'S 2 GUYS SPIKY BLONDE HAIRED WITH BLUE EYES! AHAHHAAHHA THE SHINRA WILL GET CONFUSED
WTF THERE'S 2 GUYS SPIKY BLONDE HAIRED WITH BLUE EYES! AHAHHAAHHA THE SHINRA WILL GET CONFUSED
9/26/2017 c2 Shu Ouma GC
Good story just found this, every story should have this kind of level of story telling.
Good story just found this, every story should have this kind of level of story telling.
9/18/2017 c3 inaya
great. awesome sauce sasuke is here to run everyone's lives.
great. awesome sauce sasuke is here to run everyone's lives.
8/26/2017 c34 Ddastan
Nice chapter and all that... But I though Aerith was a Virgin, and they didn't had Sex, because Naruto didn't want her first time to be in a "run-down" building.
How did they come from only kisses and "heated" touches to Sexually Active ( and it seems they are VERY Sexually Active ) ? Honestly its not like your story its bad just because of it, but it's kinda confusing.
Nice chapter and all that... But I though Aerith was a Virgin, and they didn't had Sex, because Naruto didn't want her first time to be in a "run-down" building.
How did they come from only kisses and "heated" touches to Sexually Active ( and it seems they are VERY Sexually Active ) ? Honestly its not like your story its bad just because of it, but it's kinda confusing.
7/23/2017 c1 marquis.shax
if Naruto has to rely on Materia that just seems like he's an OC not the true Naruto
if Naruto has to rely on Materia that just seems like he's an OC not the true Naruto