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3/18/2017 c33 2DoctorDan
Uh... The lemon is very out of place. I'm inclined to believe that someone else wrote it for you, simply because of the stylistic change. Usually I'm all for lemons, but this doesn't flow at all.
3/17/2017 c33 2Dark Natsu Dragneel
I hope your next update will be devil ninja
3/17/2017 c33 ARSLOTHES
Wasn't stated in an earlier chapter that they didn't have sex before this?
3/17/2017 c32 Alyr Lin
Thank you very much for the chapter.
3/17/2017 c31 Alyr Lin
Welcome back! Thanks for the chapter.
3/17/2017 c33 1Brightheart10
That was a good chapter
3/17/2017 c33 Liedral
Hmm.. reread the entire fic just recently. Pretty glad you started writing this again, but I could've sworn Aerith was a virgin and they wanted their first time to be special and not in a random shack. Oh.. also another error correction, Bugenhagen called Aerith a Qetra instead of Cetra.
3/17/2017 c33 lou2003us
That was awesome. I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
3/17/2017 c33 3Markus-Antonius
Great job man! I'm gonna reread this story though, because jeez it's been a while since I read that first chapter lol
3/17/2017 c33 fieryfoxpaws
Thanks for the chapter.
3/17/2017 c33 Train Heartnett
Awesome !
3/17/2017 c33 8Quathis
Looks like their going pretty well for now. I do hope that Naruto is more mindful of his surroundings now that it has been shown that someone can sneak up on him. Until next time.
3/17/2017 c33 1R-king 93
Interesting chapter
3/17/2017 c33 3Dark Link M Smith
love theres fast updates keep it up
3/17/2017 c33 8Jebest4781
this was great man and love what you did here. will be great on what else comes up
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