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12/11/2016 c33 2Raging Raven
Yay
4/14/2016 c32 20orcafan1
Please update soon
3/9/2016 c32 Guest
Please update soon! X
8/8/2015 c30 Dalonige Noquisi
More please!
7/24/2015 c29 Shan
Please please PLEASE!Make more of these. I know its been very long but I love your writing and I love this story. Please write the rest of the series! :D
4/10/2015 c29 Dalonige Noquisi
Hal, you ass. Poor Sophie. Glad she ended Mary
4/1/2015 c29 orcafan1
Good chapter
3/16/2015 c28 2MissPinderx
Really good chapter! I want a flash back of how they met. I love flash backs ️ Thanks for the lovely update. X
2/19/2015 c28 Dalonige Noquisi
I've missed this story! Great chapter
3/20/2014 c27 Guest
Can't wait for more! It's an extremely good story and I can tell you take a lot of time and put a lot of effort into writing this. I'd love to see more of Hal and Sophie's past, but I'm sure that you've got it all covered! Oh and I'd absolutely adore it if you continued after the series finale maybe see what the future lies for human Hal and Sophie? Maybe they could do all the things they'd wanted to do but couldn't as vampires? Anyway keep up the amazing work!
3/20/2014 c15 Guest
I have to say I was so excited to read a story like this but ended up disappointed. It's not a real story with developed characters. Sophie, we don't know much about her except for stolen lines from Hal. She barely has her own dialogue and much of the story live and scenes are from the tv show. You should add more scenes created from your own adding Sophie to make her well rounded. This isn't really even a story just rereading the tv series with a few sentences changes that belong to Sophie. When the writer starts taking a character like Hal's dialogue when he threatened the pawn shop keeper and splitting it with the OC that is never good. It's never a good storyline. Have her have her own lines, own reactions, she could have just stood there or held him back would have been better than those stolen lines. I will say I do skim a lot in you're chapters because I already know what happens next and as a reader we all expect some storyline from the tv show but adding yor own spin on it. I hope you don't take this the wrong way and think I am bashing you. I'm just trying to help.
2/17/2014 c27 MissPinderx
Good stuff, cant wait for more :D x
1/13/2014 c27 Lucy
Can't wait for the next update.
1/13/2014 c26 Jess
Great chapter!
1/8/2014 c27 20orcafan1
Love the chapter and good luck with your exams!
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