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3/8/2012 c2 2JaguarCello
it's fairly decent, but I#m not so keen on the way you've put stuff from the telly series in. Don't get me wrong, it's really good, but I just feel it should be more about your amazing ideas :)
3/7/2012 c2 Dalonige Noquisi
I was very excited to see a new chap you! And a very good chap it is :) I love all the extra work you put into getting the lines perfectly. I was quite impressed. Also Hal is very true to character, with just enough tweeking to fit Sophi in there. I do have to say there are a few missing punctuations but it was easily over looked. I can't wait for the next chap ;)
3/7/2012 c2 2Avis11
Just found your story and I already love it ! Update soon!:)


3/7/2012 c2 35daysofsummer
omfg love it its amazingggggggggggg xxxxxxxxxxx
3/6/2012 c1 Mike
Pretty good.
3/6/2012 c1 Jane
Love the idea.
3/5/2012 c1 Dalonige Noquisi
Can't wait for more
3/5/2012 c1 5daysofsummer
love it


i lov hw u know about the prequal

plz updat asap xxxx
3/5/2012 c1 becca
plz do more ^_^

i like how u used the prequal xxxx
3/5/2012 c1 gemma
not bad

i lik eit :):):)
3/5/2012 c1 hunny
great star hunnie

do more soon
3/5/2012 c1 JESS
3/5/2012 c1 lucy
love it

plz dooooooooooooo more xoxoxoxox
3/3/2012 c1 1werewolfsoldiergirl
I hope you will continue with this. I love what you've done so far, using the prequal and eveyrthing and I'm so glad you seem to know the series' characters.
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