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11/6/2016 c52 Guest
This was amzing well done
5/23/2013 c52 Jaidyn Nix
I loved it I'm only 13 and it was fantastic to me a pure joy to read
3/11/2013 c52 ShesNotAfraid1D29
This was one o the most amazing fanfiction stories I have ever read. I got so sucked that I couldnt put it down. I read all 52 chapters in one sitting. I was a little skeptical about reading it at first, but it got really good. I just have on piece of critism and that is to watch for grammar. But other than that I loved! I also loved all tbe humor I was pratically rolling on the floor. Thanks for writing an amazing Fan Fic!(:
3/10/2013 c1 will n jem
um...hi. just wanna say, maybe you should try putting on punctuation marks. Mejo mahirap kasi basahin pag puro corrections. Tapos i'm not sure if i like the flow of the story. Too drama-ish. yun lng. Tnx and keep trying.

PS: pahabol ni jem: nakakaloko daw title mo. Camille's side of the story pero may moose's POV. What da?

PEACE.
2/21/2013 c52 IIIIRENE
it was amazing the story line and the plot but you just couldnt get the ED's right you would probably go :i went to the toilet and kiss him goodnight instead of i went to the toilet and kissed him goodnight
or
i felt like the kissed lasted forever instead of i felt that the kiss lasted forever
and every time you wantes to say it's you said it i hope you take this review into consideration when you write you next story
2/12/2013 c52 BustYourWindows
You know that sad feeling you get when something so good ends? Yeah, I just had that happen to me reading the last chapter of this story. Such a great ending. I love it! They went through so much in the story, but they had a great ending. I just completely loved it so much. -Del 3
2/12/2013 c52 samcheese1
Aw! I loved it! Good work.
2/12/2013 c52 4UglyJumper
I'll admit that this hasn't been a favourite of mine, some advice for future stories (this is purely constructive and hopefully helpful criticism) you should include more detail - for example details of where they are, smells, sounds etcetera, your stories seem to be mainly speech and monologuing - perhaps you should try your hand at script writing? Anyway, great story lines in this am sad to see it end. Looking forward to future stories! xxx
1/31/2013 c51 Guest
Well took moose long enough to tell Sophie he is dating Cam. I feel so proud of Cam for sticking with her plan!(:

Great Chapter I'm so glad you update! 33
1/30/2013 c50 samcheese1
It's still good, but honestly, I think the story is starting to just drag on at this point. I hope it has a really good climax soon.
1/30/2013 c49 Guest
Please update soon. I wanna keep reading.
1/22/2013 c6 2jonasbrothersforever1992
wow, i love this story! i've read it like five times already and i cen't get enough of it. when are you gonna update? mind checking my story out?
1/20/2013 c1 Guest
when r u gonna update?!
10/24/2012 c49 BustYourWindows
Oh yeah! I'm loving it! Yay for Cam! Lol can't wait for the next update great great chapter :)
10/19/2012 c48 BustYourWindows
Oh yay Camille is gonna get even! :D lol can't waiter the next update! Amazing chapter! (:
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