for Twelve3/12/2019 c1 Guest
Fantastic. Heartbreaking.
Fantastic. Heartbreaking.
5/11/2012 c1 polka
If my gushing on Salt hasn't already conveyed this - you are amazing. This is so good I literally don't know what to say.
It is beautiful and subtle and utterly heartbreaking. I love how you never tell the readers how to feel, but have just let your words paint the picture. Also, your explorations of the relationship between John and Sherlock is amazing -its friendship but also something entirely different.
I'm no longer making sense- just never stop writing okay?
If my gushing on Salt hasn't already conveyed this - you are amazing. This is so good I literally don't know what to say.
It is beautiful and subtle and utterly heartbreaking. I love how you never tell the readers how to feel, but have just let your words paint the picture. Also, your explorations of the relationship between John and Sherlock is amazing -its friendship but also something entirely different.
I'm no longer making sense- just never stop writing okay?
3/11/2012 c1 
1chrysanthesXxX
Your writing is impressive, thanks for sharing this, although it destroyed me and I'm never gonna be happy again. Still thanks.
1chrysanthesXxXYour writing is impressive, thanks for sharing this, although it destroyed me and I'm never gonna be happy again. Still thanks.
3/10/2012 c1 3tabbiecat
Lol, brain power was required. Liked the story. :) And the poetry within the prose. Poor Sherlock. And Lestrade. :(
3tabbiecatLol, brain power was required. Liked the story. :) And the poetry within the prose. Poor Sherlock. And Lestrade. :(
3/6/2012 c1 37deaka
This is intense and very well done - very well structured, too, in line with Sherlock slowly sinking into surrender or apathy. Lovely piece of angst :)
37deakaThis is intense and very well done - very well structured, too, in line with Sherlock slowly sinking into surrender or apathy. Lovely piece of angst :)
3/6/2012 c1 deaka
This is intense and very well done - very well structured, too, in line with Sherlock slowly sinking into surrender or apathy. Lovely piece of angst :)
This is intense and very well done - very well structured, too, in line with Sherlock slowly sinking into surrender or apathy. Lovely piece of angst :)
3/6/2012 c1 3CryptoSquirrel
Holy cow. That broke my heart into a thousand million pieces. I'm reeling...
It was gorgeously written, and the discontinuous timeline was actually beautiful and perfect and /very/ well organized, so not confusing at all. Sherlock was perfect. He was absolutely in character and it was amazing. Wow. So glad this is not how the story really went, though!
Thank you so much :)
3CryptoSquirrelHoly cow. That broke my heart into a thousand million pieces. I'm reeling...
It was gorgeously written, and the discontinuous timeline was actually beautiful and perfect and /very/ well organized, so not confusing at all. Sherlock was perfect. He was absolutely in character and it was amazing. Wow. So glad this is not how the story really went, though!
Thank you so much :)
3/6/2012 c1 Guest
i... wow. just, wow.
your characterisation is perfect. i don't even know what else to say. just, wow. you've reduced me to ineloquence.
i... wow. just, wow.
your characterisation is perfect. i don't even know what else to say. just, wow. you've reduced me to ineloquence.