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7/16/2019 c23 2thelostlibrarian
Holy Shit! I'm sorry for swearing but damn. This was one of the deepest, realest and most gut renching stories I have ever read. You have a real gift.
3/7/2018 c23 3Babytrouty
great story it was very interesting
11/22/2015 c23 2Broadway's Next Baby
Whoa. That was heavy. Amazing story, I loved it, but whoa.
11/22/2015 c20 Broadway's Next Baby
This story is so good but why my Faberry heart what have you done
10/5/2015 c23 Louise
'She'd had a sister. Oh, she'd had a beautiful little baby sister. Kyla had been everything that Mercedes wanted to be when she was her age. She was strong. She was tall. She was beautiful, and everyone adored her.
And she died a little after she was born. In fact, she hardly lasted a day before she died because she had too much fluid in her lungs that they couldn't get out at the NICU.'

how was she tall if she was only a day old? that makes no sense.

and honestly, an autopsy would tell that artie overdosed. were his parents like 'oh no someone broke into our house and made our son die of mysterious reasons!'

an autopsy would also likely be able to distinguish between someone being hanged and someone being strangled. why can dave figure that out but not trained professionals?

'he'd barely gotten to know the boy, but wished there was something he could've said to help the closeted gay'

ah yes, the gay. if only he could have helped that gay. what a poor gay.

the majority of this story is OOC, bordering on ridiculous. I get what you were trying to achieve, but it fell flat.

ps: I realise this was written 3 years ago and you may have grown as a writer since. I know this review seems harsh and I apologise, but honestly so much of this story was problematic.
8/8/2015 c23 CarvieCamfia
Did people kill them so they could commit suicide? Xxx
12/19/2014 c23 1TeamBrittany
You are a genius. This story is well-written, it's emotional, makes someone angry, happy, sad, feel abandoned and found at the same time.
6/4/2014 c23 rebelgirls4563
Why?
4/13/2014 c23 2Juana of Castile
OMG so good! And so sad! I find it so cool how close Mike's situation is to Moritz's!
1/10/2014 c23 2WAngeline
I love this story up to the last story (especially seeing how I knew most of the songs) so thanks so much for writing. However, I don't think that this successfully serves as a warning against suicide. I mean, there are perks. Artie having his working legs, Tina reuniting with him, Kurt becoming Chloe, getting to see the world, although through a barrier. That's the only catch, isn't it?
Still, I don't mean to be a downer, I really enjoyed reading this.
10/15/2013 c4 Guest
This needs to b M!
10/8/2013 c23 7nifffanatic
I was flicking through my list of favorite stories and read this again, still made me cry through out. It is beautifully written story no matter how sad.
8/28/2013 c23 Ze
;-; ;-; I feel like I have a love/hate relationship with this story. It made me cry...a lot. But I loved it.
Good work.
You made the unbreakable break. And I respect you for that.
8/9/2013 c7 JJ
I just read this story in one sitting, and can I just say how amazing you are? Because you truly are. This story was beautiful, truly beautiful and haunting. The only thing that's still unsettled in my mind is Sam's story, I reread the part again about the Sadie Hawkins dance, and could've it been Blaine? Blaine talked about how he had also experienced a beating at the Sadie Hawkins and then transferred to Dalton, and he has his older brother Cooper who could've been about to pick them up... Great story.
8/1/2013 c23 Guest
I have read every glee suicide fanfic and this one is by far the best. I LOOOOOOOVVVVVEEEEEDDDDDD IT!
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