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6/27/2012 c9 the monkey ninja
In my opinion, you make Big Mac sound too much like a complete, inconsiderate duchebag.
6/25/2012 c1 10Solar-Paladin-Kuro
this is really good. I like the premise of the story, keep up the good work.
4/30/2012 c16 14CeeCee Red
this was an awesome story :) I was afraid you were gonna kill him off in the end! But i'm glad you didn't lol this was awesome ^^
4/19/2012 c16 SEfervteGBFDGfdbs54y64b564btBS
This was a really great story, how the heck am I only the third reviewer?

Like I said, great story. :3
4/18/2012 c1 Sabatron
The most awesome thing I have ever read. You sir, are a great writer. Please continue to write more stories, good sir.
3/11/2012 c1 Feign of Autumn
Well, I saw the fic only glancing over it because... You know generally people look for a popular fic, but I saw this fic and read the blurb. Intrigued but still not sure I read the first chapter and I liked it, a lot. But of course there is still constructive critisism to be given, you give detail in your writing and the speech is really good at showing off their personalities really well, but! I wish you would extend all this amazing speech because it's over really quickly and it felt as though there was less impact in places where there could have been. Now with that finished I leave you to go read some more of this fic, my last words being FIRST!

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