for Brighter than the sun3/8/2015 c6 Guest
Wow I thought on chapter 5 AppleJack was going to say no to poor Caramel! Ah I think AppleJack and Caramel are really perfect for each other. Don't you think?
Wow I thought on chapter 5 AppleJack was going to say no to poor Caramel! Ah I think AppleJack and Caramel are really perfect for each other. Don't you think?
7/13/2014 c6 anya
I thought it was okay.
I thought it was okay.
1/31/2014 c2 Smol Len
This story is forming really well. I like it very much. I feel so sorry for Caramel.
This story is forming really well. I like it very much. I feel so sorry for Caramel.
11/13/2013 c6 flneur
It's very cutesy and fluffy. It's my firt time reading an MLP fanfic but I think I chose a good fanfic to give my MLP-fanfic-virginity to. Carry on with the good work and update soon!
It's very cutesy and fluffy. It's my firt time reading an MLP fanfic but I think I chose a good fanfic to give my MLP-fanfic-virginity to. Carry on with the good work and update soon!
12/12/2012 c6 Liz
Plz update now,I've waited for 4 months now,I mean,I'm not that Impatient,it just,you have to continue...we are all gonna be impatient,It was a very good story! :)
Plz update now,I've waited for 4 months now,I mean,I'm not that Impatient,it just,you have to continue...we are all gonna be impatient,It was a very good story! :)
7/26/2012 c5 
21Mirajane Ryuu-Darkwings
hm, i usually comment on the latest chaps posted, so here goes.
i really like caramel/applejack pairing. i'm glad you didnt forget he had a gf in the show, you know in one of the episodes.
the story itself is very interesting and i really like it.
but of course, if you could make the chapters a but longer it would be loads better.
nevertheless, i dont see anything lacking in the story.
okie, a smallish request? well i like fluttermac as well, but you know, if you plan to put any more side pairings in this story beside that one, please let it be soarindash xDDD
anyways, this story goes to my stalklists o.o
will be waiting for an update too.
cheers :)
21Mirajane Ryuu-Darkwingshm, i usually comment on the latest chaps posted, so here goes.
i really like caramel/applejack pairing. i'm glad you didnt forget he had a gf in the show, you know in one of the episodes.
the story itself is very interesting and i really like it.
but of course, if you could make the chapters a but longer it would be loads better.
nevertheless, i dont see anything lacking in the story.
okie, a smallish request? well i like fluttermac as well, but you know, if you plan to put any more side pairings in this story beside that one, please let it be soarindash xDDD
anyways, this story goes to my stalklists o.o
will be waiting for an update too.
cheers :)
7/6/2012 c5 11ShiningShadow1965
That was a great chapter I love it. Excellent job on the writing and plot I can't get enough if it. Now the shipping ok here goes I really want a Rarity with Soaring or AppleJack with Soaring he loves those apple pies. What about a Big Mac with Cadence before she knew Shining Armor. Well that's all I got right now bravo.
11ShiningShadow1965That was a great chapter I love it. Excellent job on the writing and plot I can't get enough if it. Now the shipping ok here goes I really want a Rarity with Soaring or AppleJack with Soaring he loves those apple pies. What about a Big Mac with Cadence before she knew Shining Armor. Well that's all I got right now bravo.
6/21/2012 c5 kabal1337
Great chapter, really leaves me wanting more. As for ideas, I've always liked Pokey PiercexPinky Pie. Or perhaps SoarinxRainbow Dash? ScootalooxFeatherweight? I like those pairings. That's all I've got for ideas, keep up the great work.
Great chapter, really leaves me wanting more. As for ideas, I've always liked Pokey PiercexPinky Pie. Or perhaps SoarinxRainbow Dash? ScootalooxFeatherweight? I like those pairings. That's all I've got for ideas, keep up the great work.
5/19/2012 c4 ShiningShadow1965
That was a very sweet and enjoyable chapter. The flow of the story was great and crisp of the plotline and the writing is so.simple that jumps out at you bravo.
That was a very sweet and enjoyable chapter. The flow of the story was great and crisp of the plotline and the writing is so.simple that jumps out at you bravo.
5/15/2012 c3 ShiningShadow1965
That chapter was excellent on the writing and plot development. Now aj had a bad dream about her parents and that tornado and that lullaby and caramel. So many questions for aj and who knows what will developed more further in the story bravo.
That chapter was excellent on the writing and plot development. Now aj had a bad dream about her parents and that tornado and that lullaby and caramel. So many questions for aj and who knows what will developed more further in the story bravo.
5/15/2012 c2 ShiningShadow1965
That very good second chapter now I'm beginning to understand caramel problems. Like a country western song my best friend cheated on my wife lost my home and other stuff. Let continue onward.
That very good second chapter now I'm beginning to understand caramel problems. Like a country western song my best friend cheated on my wife lost my home and other stuff. Let continue onward.