
7/15/2012 c1
12captindonavin
That was beautiful. just truely... and you captured exactly what i want tohear when i move on except for the fact that i am a girl. oh it was beautiful. thankyou.
Donnie

That was beautiful. just truely... and you captured exactly what i want tohear when i move on except for the fact that i am a girl. oh it was beautiful. thankyou.
Donnie
6/23/2012 c1
17Queen Katrina the Seafarer
Amazing. I never thought of Oreius being the doubting Thomas, but it was amazing and I could picture it in my mind. It was well written too!

Amazing. I never thought of Oreius being the doubting Thomas, but it was amazing and I could picture it in my mind. It was well written too!
5/18/2012 c1 A Fan
Really nice. I like the way you put Oreius in the place of Thomas-the one thing in the whole LWW that's missing.
Really nice. I like the way you put Oreius in the place of Thomas-the one thing in the whole LWW that's missing.
3/31/2012 c1
2SchoolGirl013
Beautiful. just beautiful my friend. The way you expressed what many Christians struggle with, what they should do, how you quoted the Scripture, it was so wonderfully written my friend! :)
I am a believer myself! God Bless You

Beautiful. just beautiful my friend. The way you expressed what many Christians struggle with, what they should do, how you quoted the Scripture, it was so wonderfully written my friend! :)
I am a believer myself! God Bless You
3/10/2012 c1
236LadyAlambiel
Interesting take...never thought of Oreius being the doubting Thomas but I like it. I like it a lot, well done! Can't wait to see what's next! Keep writing!

Interesting take...never thought of Oreius being the doubting Thomas but I like it. I like it a lot, well done! Can't wait to see what's next! Keep writing!