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1/4/2016 c1 3geassgurl
This is just amazing, I was in tears at the end. Very beautiful, very tragic. Keep up the good work.
7/8/2012 c1 Sebby M not W
Beautiful. Damn, that's really well written.

I have to say, this is really impressive. It was definitely a good choice to write this in 1st person POV, since it gave the story a necessary depth that would definitely be lacking should you have used 3rd person POV.

But you did an excellent job of providing a glimpse into each character's mind while still keeping the pace of the story, rather than focusing too long on their thoughts. I realise it's very difficult for some (including me) to achieve such a balance, but you've done it brilliantly here.

Also, I appreciate you not slathering this with romance. Although I am fine with slash, this fic would have been much less enjoyable if you had decided to douse it with sappy thoughts and such. There were some hints, but nothing outright or explicit, thankfully.

All in all, I really enjoyed this. Great job, hope to see more of your work.
5/29/2012 c1 4Neiraaa
I love Sherlock fandom because it's the only place you can ship a psychopath criminal mastermind with a sniper who was never seen or even mentioned in the show and feel really sad when someone kills them in a fanfiction.

Really good story. Poor MorMor :(
5/17/2012 c1 Rai Twist
wonderfully done, although I'm having a hard time believing Sherlock would kill someone, even Moriarty, I think I can buy your story for its sake


because it was marvellous, seriously. The bit of Jim's POV? Clenched my heart


I think you should set the story status to 'complete' though. Just because there are people who don't read wip and will miss this
5/5/2012 c1 1Captain Happiness
Utterly gorgeous but tragic - beautifully done, and now I'm crying. Le sigh indeed. But I adored your characterisation of Jim - you managed to show that he cared without making him /sappy/. This was a wonderful idea, and you pulled it off so well, so well done there. :3

5/2/2012 c1 18passiveInferno
Oh gosh, I'm usually a little averse to Moriarty showing genuine softer sides, but you actually pulled it off incredibly well! This is really good!
4/20/2012 c1 12Sherlock-in-the-TARDIS
I'm a hardcore Mormor shipper, but this is the most emotionally intense thing I think I've ever read concerning that ship. Beautiful
4/18/2012 c1 13lifeinthemacro
Oh my :0 Very well done.

I really liked this one :)

4/13/2012 c1
Think I've ready reviewed this but anyway.

All my CREYS. Anyway, I love the way you shifted between the POV, I immediately read Jim's section differently to that of Sherlock's.

Must have been a real surprise to Seb ;'(
3/21/2012 c1 14ongreenergrasses



Let my favoriting this story speak for itself, kay?
3/14/2012 c1 23velonicaSushi
And here I was, sobbing like the time I watched The Reichenbach Falls.

Great job! First fic to be able to move me into tears.
3/13/2012 c1 Falt
You made me cry. Honest to god, tears are on my face. I love James and Seb. And you just made this horrifyingly, sickeningly beautiful. Wonderful job. Truly.
3/13/2012 c1 19quiteunhappywiththis
Thought I had already reviewed this, but then I came back to it because the summary looked cool and I didn't remember it cos I followed the link from tumblr and asdfghjkl.

Anyway. I /really really/ love the way you've written Jim. REALLY. REALLY lOVE IT. Keep it up!
3/12/2012 c1 Rach
Thanks for breaking my heart.
3/12/2012 c1 1Eyebrows2213
;( okay you got me. I am crying. Real tears are soaking into my laptop.wh-why am i crying?
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