for A New World, The Story Of A Lost Shinobi3/12/2012 c1 TianA
Good start! I want the next chapter already! :-)
Good start! I want the next chapter already! :-)
3/11/2012 c1 Zeros
Nice man wonder who will teach Naruto this language maybe Levy or Mira? Also hope he gets paired with Levy or Lucy.
Nice man wonder who will teach Naruto this language maybe Levy or Mira? Also hope he gets paired with Levy or Lucy.
3/11/2012 c1 
2RoasrioDorkfish
Interesting start, it is to early to say much about it right now but I eagerly await the next chapter. Please update ASAP.
2RoasrioDorkfishInteresting start, it is to early to say much about it right now but I eagerly await the next chapter. Please update ASAP.
3/11/2012 c1 15Fangking2
Oh? a language barrier? That makes this story complete different from other NarutoxFairy...Good show.
15Fangking2Oh? a language barrier? That makes this story complete different from other NarutoxFairy...Good show.
3/11/2012 c1 Izanagi
Ok this has a great start but will this be a harem or a single pairing? I hope you use the rarely used girls like Lucy,Levy,Cana or Mira. Erza used way too much
Ok this has a great start but will this be a harem or a single pairing? I hope you use the rarely used girls like Lucy,Levy,Cana or Mira. Erza used way too much
3/11/2012 c1 1ddcj1990
Nice like this chapter cant wait for the next one also I think you should have Naruto paired with Lucy and Erza
1ddcj1990Nice like this chapter cant wait for the next one also I think you should have Naruto paired with Lucy and Erza
3/11/2012 c1 3Marvey4
Well I can say this; I certainly hope that the fact that the story has only Naruto's name tagged doesn't mean that this will be a harem story because seriously, the story has a good start and it doesn't need this since it's something so not Narutoish.
Anyway, as I said, good start. The characters that appeared so far were well written and I can say that the way Naruto was sent to Earthland is not bad or overused so it's all cool. I wonder how long it will take for Naruto to start learning Fiore's language.
3Marvey4Well I can say this; I certainly hope that the fact that the story has only Naruto's name tagged doesn't mean that this will be a harem story because seriously, the story has a good start and it doesn't need this since it's something so not Narutoish.
Anyway, as I said, good start. The characters that appeared so far were well written and I can say that the way Naruto was sent to Earthland is not bad or overused so it's all cool. I wonder how long it will take for Naruto to start learning Fiore's language.