
11/1/2021 c1 tq
I know it's been damn near a decade but I'm still willing to go on this ride with u. actually I just realized that since I no longer have an account on this site (and you probably don't either) that is very unlikely to happen but i am interested in this story and I like the writing style so dammit I'm going to leave a comment
I know it's been damn near a decade but I'm still willing to go on this ride with u. actually I just realized that since I no longer have an account on this site (and you probably don't either) that is very unlikely to happen but i am interested in this story and I like the writing style so dammit I'm going to leave a comment
4/18/2017 c1 WrittenByFrankie
I know I'm rather late coming into this fandom, which is a shame as I am sure I have missed out on some grand stories. But I absolutely love your formation of writing, and look forward to reading more work of your own. x
I know I'm rather late coming into this fandom, which is a shame as I am sure I have missed out on some grand stories. But I absolutely love your formation of writing, and look forward to reading more work of your own. x
4/6/2017 c1
3InsanityIsNormal2004
I like this. Sometimes i felt like I was going to cry. PLEASE CONTINUE!

I like this. Sometimes i felt like I was going to cry. PLEASE CONTINUE!
11/5/2016 c1 Queen Cuntbag
It was an excellent story and honestly I love it and I love seeing Lois actually give a fuck instead of screaming at them.
It was an excellent story and honestly I love it and I love seeing Lois actually give a fuck instead of screaming at them.
2/22/2016 c1
64Subtle Shenanigans
Very ... intruiging concept (something breaking Francis, that is).
As long as you don't go too in detail about the whole ordeal, I'm good. I like the concept of, well, angst and Francis, since everything else is either Hal or Lois dies or Malcolm or Reese is suicidal ( I actually like the concept of Malcolm having legitamate depression but have only found one writer branch this way).
Hope for another chapter.

Very ... intruiging concept (something breaking Francis, that is).
As long as you don't go too in detail about the whole ordeal, I'm good. I like the concept of, well, angst and Francis, since everything else is either Hal or Lois dies or Malcolm or Reese is suicidal ( I actually like the concept of Malcolm having legitamate depression but have only found one writer branch this way).
Hope for another chapter.
6/27/2014 c1 Clickydowiz
Intense raw writing you really captured my attention. I wish you would have left what happened to him a mystery, all the same reactions but say he won't talk keep it vegue.
Intense raw writing you really captured my attention. I wish you would have left what happened to him a mystery, all the same reactions but say he won't talk keep it vegue.
2/9/2013 c1
15goldenspecter
oh. my GOD! i dont know what to say... i could envision the mother/son bonding scene(it was to me but the way for them to bond was unfortunate) beautiful. if you are having any trouble, you can always PM me and i will be willing to help you further your story. poor francis. :(

oh. my GOD! i dont know what to say... i could envision the mother/son bonding scene(it was to me but the way for them to bond was unfortunate) beautiful. if you are having any trouble, you can always PM me and i will be willing to help you further your story. poor francis. :(
8/15/2012 c1
30Maple Princess
Wow, that was really well written ! :o
I could feel just like Lois, the scene and emotions are awesomly described.
Yet, poor Francis :( (he is my favorite, along with Dewey).
Great job !

Wow, that was really well written ! :o
I could feel just like Lois, the scene and emotions are awesomly described.
Yet, poor Francis :( (he is my favorite, along with Dewey).
Great job !
7/25/2012 c1 alec
Keep going please
Keep going please
7/14/2012 c1 Guest
update
update
7/5/2012 c1 Guest
Excellent characterization. It's interesting to see them in a morenserious, somber setting. Any chance of updating? And do the others eventually find out?
Excellent characterization. It's interesting to see them in a morenserious, somber setting. Any chance of updating? And do the others eventually find out?