for Mass Effect: Human Revolution11/29/2024 c18 
7ZeaDragon
Ah, I get it. Jun Shepard was a Bioroid that didn't obey its programming/orders.
7ZeaDragonAh, I get it. Jun Shepard was a Bioroid that didn't obey its programming/orders.
3/1/2024 c37 2BlueBlazeCOMET
Holy FUCK I love me some System Shock references. You've been leaving so many references around this story I was keeping System Shock in the back of my mind pocket just in case. And you delivered.
Fantastic writing.
2BlueBlazeCOMETHoly FUCK I love me some System Shock references. You've been leaving so many references around this story I was keeping System Shock in the back of my mind pocket just in case. And you delivered.
Fantastic writing.
2/20/2024 c11 mst3ktoo
Jesus you couldn't pick a worse situation to get yourself a job. Blackmail the boss with humiliation? Is he planning on keeping that hanging over his head forever with some recordings? He's sitting alanco up for some pain and suffering
Jesus you couldn't pick a worse situation to get yourself a job. Blackmail the boss with humiliation? Is he planning on keeping that hanging over his head forever with some recordings? He's sitting alanco up for some pain and suffering
2/12/2024 c91 drakiesan
P.S.: The problem of this fic is that it is extremely ambitious. Way too much. It's just a mess. An awful maze of nonsense and barely understood concepts. Kinda sad, the start was interesting (before Noveria). But during Noveria and after, the story just degraded.
P.S.: The problem of this fic is that it is extremely ambitious. Way too much. It's just a mess. An awful maze of nonsense and barely understood concepts. Kinda sad, the start was interesting (before Noveria). But during Noveria and after, the story just degraded.
2/12/2024 c47 drakiesan
The whole fic is an unreadable mess of references nobody gets unless they know detailed lore of Deus Ex and Mass Effect, the several languages mixed together doesn't help, and the whole fic is a bloated mess of story lines full of holes and annoyance. It became really boring, especially with Jensen losing his MC status, and becoming a mess of personalities meshed together to create a messiah, basically a goody two shoes.
And what is worst, the whole fic is BORING! The bait-and-switch tactics are terribly overdone here. Jensen lives only thanks to PLOT ARMOR thicker than Naruto's...
The whole fic is an unreadable mess of references nobody gets unless they know detailed lore of Deus Ex and Mass Effect, the several languages mixed together doesn't help, and the whole fic is a bloated mess of story lines full of holes and annoyance. It became really boring, especially with Jensen losing his MC status, and becoming a mess of personalities meshed together to create a messiah, basically a goody two shoes.
And what is worst, the whole fic is BORING! The bait-and-switch tactics are terribly overdone here. Jensen lives only thanks to PLOT ARMOR thicker than Naruto's...
1/9/2024 c91 2Malgrath
Did ME!Adam actully wake up in these circumstances and the secret history goes WAY farther back, or is the memories of Nier!Adam bleeding and he just perceives them as is own?
2MalgrathDid ME!Adam actully wake up in these circumstances and the secret history goes WAY farther back, or is the memories of Nier!Adam bleeding and he just perceives them as is own?
1/8/2024 c86 Malgrath
Jesus fucking christ Hein. Remember when i said jumping the shark? Welk that shark turned into a a megalodon. Fucking folding space physics, Conrad's not-a-Conrad-slider-timeline-bullshit, secret history of humanity and androids.
Jesus fucking christ Hein. Remember when i said jumping the shark? Welk that shark turned into a a megalodon. Fucking folding space physics, Conrad's not-a-Conrad-slider-timeline-bullshit, secret history of humanity and androids.
1/8/2024 c85 Malgrath
as much i as i love this fic, i can also recognize when it jumps the shark. And it jumped the shark when vampires started draining some poor bastards. Nevermind the secret history and Nier-style androids. JC Denton being a messiah figure is believable but where does Adam fic in if he was before the Promethens and Denton? And his encounter with Aleph.
Also Teg, you're not being very subtle, you know being Geth programs stuffed in human mech body.
as much i as i love this fic, i can also recognize when it jumps the shark. And it jumped the shark when vampires started draining some poor bastards. Nevermind the secret history and Nier-style androids. JC Denton being a messiah figure is believable but where does Adam fic in if he was before the Promethens and Denton? And his encounter with Aleph.
Also Teg, you're not being very subtle, you know being Geth programs stuffed in human mech body.
1/3/2024 c51 Malgrath
So...with all thia talk of pychics, does Adam have the ability too? With aleph in his head and all the werid techno-magic stuff that comes with it, is pychic potential out ofnthe cards? You already had the bug dust-up with Scholar and Adam showed he deal ith that, some what at leastand all the slight breaks in time when he talks to Aleph implies something.
So...with all thia talk of pychics, does Adam have the ability too? With aleph in his head and all the werid techno-magic stuff that comes with it, is pychic potential out ofnthe cards? You already had the bug dust-up with Scholar and Adam showed he deal ith that, some what at leastand all the slight breaks in time when he talks to Aleph implies something.