
12/18/2021 c3 Guest
Neat start, author. Hope the murder mystery will actually be mysterious.
Neat start, author. Hope the murder mystery will actually be mysterious.
12/13/2021 c10 Deal With Itt
That seems like a Chuck reference it appears he was working with Cerberus the whole time.
Really enjoying the story
That seems like a Chuck reference it appears he was working with Cerberus the whole time.
Really enjoying the story
11/17/2021 c31 TaskRabbit
I adore this story but I swear every one of your meaningful antagonists are invulnerable bullet sponges
I adore this story but I swear every one of your meaningful antagonists are invulnerable bullet sponges
9/29/2021 c1
3awesomeman1990
I hate going into these things, knowing that they are unfinished. I remember Super Mario Bros Z. I was a child when it got cancelled and I waited 10 years for another episode, only for it to get rebooted. There's always reason for it, but well, let's see how this one goes.

I hate going into these things, knowing that they are unfinished. I remember Super Mario Bros Z. I was a child when it got cancelled and I waited 10 years for another episode, only for it to get rebooted. There's always reason for it, but well, let's see how this one goes.
9/25/2021 c85 awesomeman1990
I don't understand how Patreon works for you. This clearly isn't your job, it's a hobby, so do a couple of dollars really make a difference?
I don't understand how Patreon works for you. This clearly isn't your job, it's a hobby, so do a couple of dollars really make a difference?
9/25/2021 c81 awesomeman1990
How long have you been working on this? It feels like years but you wrote the whole thing in 2013
How long have you been working on this? It feels like years but you wrote the whole thing in 2013
9/25/2021 c80 awesomeman1990
Good god, 80 chapters was PART 1?! I haven't seen Saren in ages, I want to see the conversation with Soveriegn and you've barely covered it. How many more parts? I can already see myself in my fifties waiting for part 9.
Good stuff so far. I think I've been reading for several hours without stopping.
Good god, 80 chapters was PART 1?! I haven't seen Saren in ages, I want to see the conversation with Soveriegn and you've barely covered it. How many more parts? I can already see myself in my fifties waiting for part 9.
Good stuff so far. I think I've been reading for several hours without stopping.
9/25/2021 c79 awesomeman1990
It's been a while since a fictional character made me feel hurt. Nice job.
It's been a while since a fictional character made me feel hurt. Nice job.