for Mass Effect: Human Revolution12/18/2021 c19 Guest
Well done, author! You pulled off the murder mystery brilliantly.
Well done, author! You pulled off the murder mystery brilliantly.
12/18/2021 c17 Guest
Neat assassin.
Neat assassin.
12/18/2021 c10 Guest
I notice Benezia doesn't say we killed Shepard. So I'm gonna refrain from booing you as a hack just yet, author.
I notice Benezia doesn't say we killed Shepard. So I'm gonna refrain from booing you as a hack just yet, author.
12/18/2021 c9 Guest
So he just let the exploding skycar fall on the highway? Thought Jensen was trying specifically to not be a cowboy cop.
Also, go back to the murder mystery. We all know Shep's killer can't be Saren's goons, would be too obvious.
(if it turns out that it really is Saren I'm gonna boo you as a hack)
So he just let the exploding skycar fall on the highway? Thought Jensen was trying specifically to not be a cowboy cop.
Also, go back to the murder mystery. We all know Shep's killer can't be Saren's goons, would be too obvious.
(if it turns out that it really is Saren I'm gonna boo you as a hack)
12/18/2021 c8 Guest
Cool cyberpunk but what happened to the murder mystery?
Cool cyberpunk but what happened to the murder mystery?
12/18/2021 c3 Guest
Neat start, author. Hope the murder mystery will actually be mysterious.
Neat start, author. Hope the murder mystery will actually be mysterious.
12/13/2021 c10 Deal With Itt
That seems like a Chuck reference it appears he was working with Cerberus the whole time.
Really enjoying the story
That seems like a Chuck reference it appears he was working with Cerberus the whole time.
Really enjoying the story
11/17/2021 c31 TaskRabbit
I adore this story but I swear every one of your meaningful antagonists are invulnerable bullet sponges
I adore this story but I swear every one of your meaningful antagonists are invulnerable bullet sponges
9/29/2021 c1 
3awesomeman1990
I hate going into these things, knowing that they are unfinished. I remember Super Mario Bros Z. I was a child when it got cancelled and I waited 10 years for another episode, only for it to get rebooted. There's always reason for it, but well, let's see how this one goes.
3awesomeman1990I hate going into these things, knowing that they are unfinished. I remember Super Mario Bros Z. I was a child when it got cancelled and I waited 10 years for another episode, only for it to get rebooted. There's always reason for it, but well, let's see how this one goes.