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6HiddenMaster
Figures things wouldn't go smoothly...well, by smoothly I mean go even more Fubar than it already has been. Still, it was an absolutely lovely surprise to see this updated again. I must admit, I hunger for more of this wonderfully absurd tale, but man it was good to see this again.
6HiddenMasterFigures things wouldn't go smoothly...well, by smoothly I mean go even more Fubar than it already has been. Still, it was an absolutely lovely surprise to see this updated again. I must admit, I hunger for more of this wonderfully absurd tale, but man it was good to see this again.
4/24/2021 c30 7Te Ne'tra Mand'alor
17… but that would mean Brea is jail bait. Please tell me Hein lying again to troll everyone.
7Te Ne'tra Mand'alor17… but that would mean Brea is jail bait. Please tell me Hein lying again to troll everyone.
2/17/2021 c72 5Ozzman84
Blonde, British Accent, ambiguous sexuality, calling himself Dio, That's A JoJo reference if I ever saw one
5Ozzman84Blonde, British Accent, ambiguous sexuality, calling himself Dio, That's A JoJo reference if I ever saw one
2/17/2021 c71 Ozzman84
I can't believe it! A freaking Red Alert 3 reference!? That is amazing, If I see any crazy russian technology, Floating island fortresses, transforming mecha, or if Yuriko or base Yuri appear in any way I am going to cry of happiness
I can't believe it! A freaking Red Alert 3 reference!? That is amazing, If I see any crazy russian technology, Floating island fortresses, transforming mecha, or if Yuriko or base Yuri appear in any way I am going to cry of happiness
1/19/2021 c22 Guest
Bro, se que es muy tarde para darte mi opinión, y me encanta lo que escribes, pero no me digas que una mujer se pone celosa de otros incluido un androide y después me sales con lo de que no será un interés romántico por lo de subvertir la trama. Tali es precisamente el personaje para emparejar Con Jensen y espero que nadie tenga que explicar porque es el caso. Solo ventilando Adoro lo que has hecho aquí.
Bro, se que es muy tarde para darte mi opinión, y me encanta lo que escribes, pero no me digas que una mujer se pone celosa de otros incluido un androide y después me sales con lo de que no será un interés romántico por lo de subvertir la trama. Tali es precisamente el personaje para emparejar Con Jensen y espero que nadie tenga que explicar porque es el caso. Solo ventilando Adoro lo que has hecho aquí.
12/8/2020 c31 Guest
I saw what you did with that one characters dialogue in the preview. You got that from the main villain of the Crow. I LOVE IT! Picked this up a couple of days ago, and it is fantastic. I’ll see you at the end of it!
I saw what you did with that one characters dialogue in the preview. You got that from the main villain of the Crow. I LOVE IT! Picked this up a couple of days ago, and it is fantastic. I’ll see you at the end of it!
11/19/2020 c13 6XXxxxadisxxxXX
Overall, I like the tone set by killing Shepard, but I gotta say it feels like a wasted character. They still affect the story at large, but at the same time, it would've been even more interesting to see the interactions she could've caused in the story. I also feel like it could've alienated a large portion of your reader base by setting a somewhat bleak tone and killing a (somewhat) beloved character in what seemed like completely anti-climatic death.
6XXxxxadisxxxXXOverall, I like the tone set by killing Shepard, but I gotta say it feels like a wasted character. They still affect the story at large, but at the same time, it would've been even more interesting to see the interactions she could've caused in the story. I also feel like it could've alienated a large portion of your reader base by setting a somewhat bleak tone and killing a (somewhat) beloved character in what seemed like completely anti-climatic death.
10/19/2020 c90 Ostentatiousnessness
So I’ve just been reading through the earliest chapters of this, and I’ve gotta say: I love ho you laid down a lot of the initial narrative threads that are only paying out now in those first chapters. Bravo
So I’ve just been reading through the earliest chapters of this, and I’ve gotta say: I love ho you laid down a lot of the initial narrative threads that are only paying out now in those first chapters. Bravo