for Saving The Future8/31/2017 c4 Samantha
Be cautious about things including content, language, and legalities.
Be cautious about things including content, language, and legalities.
7/3/2013 c4 alexia
you should continue the story
you should continue the story
7/3/2013 c1 alexia
i really didnt like the ending but it was really good tell then
i really didnt like the ending but it was really good tell then
7/3/2013 c4 
1JamesTKent
My first review is this. You need help with your English.
Second, mostly, I'm sorry, but I get annoyed if someone is just begging for reviews to get attention. You have some good ideas here, but you need to clean up your writing a bit to make it more readable.
1JamesTKentMy first review is this. You need help with your English.
Second, mostly, I'm sorry, but I get annoyed if someone is just begging for reviews to get attention. You have some good ideas here, but you need to clean up your writing a bit to make it more readable.
6/30/2013 c4 Lilbit4
Don't stop, nothing worst then getting into a good story like this and then it stops
Don't stop, nothing worst then getting into a good story like this and then it stops
6/30/2013 c4 27HotChocolate329
good to see an update. thanks for taking time on updating. hope u will get more reviews so that there will be more updated for us to read. great story, keep up the good work..
27HotChocolate329good to see an update. thanks for taking time on updating. hope u will get more reviews so that there will be more updated for us to read. great story, keep up the good work..
6/24/2012 c2 loveloisclark
Please update soon, loving Lois's no b.s. attitude. keep up the good work :)cheers
Please update soon, loving Lois's no b.s. attitude. keep up the good work :)cheers