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11/10/2012 c11 3Krys and Mel
I'M NOT LOGGING IN BECAUSE I'M REALLY NOT SUPPOSED TO BE ON FF AT ALL DX

But I like how it's a continuous story now...
11/9/2012 c11 Jesse1993
This is a lovely story. I would love to know how Aisha fits in to it all. I thought she was off from the start :)
Take your time with Puckabrina I agree it's better when it's built.
11/8/2012 c11 5Alapest
I love Puck, he's honestly my favorite. Daphne is a close second :)

I like your idea, I don't like rushed/predictable/the same romance :)

QOD: This book called Sounder, I'd rather read Twilight than that (and I hate Twilight with all my gut and soul!). It's just an awful book! The characters don't have names, it doesn't have a pot and it's just a kid morning over his dog. My first grade writing was more interesting than it! (I was the worst writer in my class!)
A little clipping of sounder:
The boy walker out the door and snuffled. The boy turner back towards the door but there were the children sitting on the porch. The woman was holding a pot.
I kid you not, that is basically how the book was!
11/8/2012 c11 heh
nice story ,love it!
11/7/2012 c11 3Trikster Queen
OMG. When you got to the part when Puck broke into Aisha's room, I'm like Okaaayyy... Then when she took out a knife I was like . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . What?
11/7/2012 c11 AliceGrim76
OK... now i acually do think Aisha is evil...

update!
11/7/2012 c10 AliceGrim76
O_O Aisha's EVIL... haha i just love Puck.

haha loved the whole twilight thing!
11/7/2012 c9 AliceGrim76
HA! She turned him into a frog.

ya i know what you mean by the whole Dhaperseed pairing.
11/7/2012 c11 9Ciara Wynne
This is awesome, quite frankly. And i completely understand the whole Aisha thing! I mean, if it was like two chapters and suddenly Sabrina and Puck were like "I love you, I can't believe I was so blind!" yadda yadda yadda, I would be like "so cliche" and chamge stories. But you've given us (readers, duh) something else to think about as well as a load of other things- all this thinking makes my head hurt, but in a good way. Especially like the "Puck works at Toys R Us" touch. Brilliant!
I'm sorry about your aunt, by the way. I know that you may be one of those people who hate pity, but I promise she's in my prayers. I know what it's like to lose family members.
Anyway, smashing story, and I hope you update soon.
Peace,
Ciara
11/7/2012 c11 Cookies and Cream1234567
I love your story and I literally would be devasted if you ended it. I love Sabrina and Puck. They are awesome :)
11/5/2012 c11 Miss Taco
I should be studying right now, but I decided to review instead!

:D You did it again! Another great chapter! You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time (well, technically I’m on my bed….).

I absolutely loved the end. I’m not going to lie though, Aisha really creeps me out. :0

I think it’s awesome that Puck turned into a hamster. It’s such a manly animal! :P

Anyway, I’m really glad that you’ re giving depth to this story. Even though I LOVE puckabrina, I strongly dislike fluffy and cliché stories. Bleh.

I can’t wait for the next chapter! Thanks for writing such an awesome story. :D
11/5/2012 c11 Guest
cool story so far :D
cant wait to read the next chapter!
11/4/2012 c10 26Lara D
Okay, this whole part I'm copying and pasting...it took all of my power not to laugh in the middle of the night. I just about DIED! :D

"The frog is Andy." She replied haughtily, and then turned sheepish, "I turned him into a frog."
"You turned him into a frog." He repeated.
"By accident!" She quickly added.
"Why did you turn him into a frog?"
"Because," Now she really was embarrassed, "I was feeling paranoid and I thought he was going to make a move on me. And...because I thought he might be a vampire."
"Did he sparkle?" Mustardseed asked sceptically.
"No...But he was good looking! And he had a flashy sports car!"
"Daphne," He put his hands on her shoulders and stared into her eyes seriously, "You have got to stop watching Twilight."

My gods...that was hilarious.

Even though you say they are a meaningless pairing, you're really making me think Daphne and Mustardseed are absolutely more adorable together than they already are with this chapter. (That probably didn't make sense)

Thanks for the chapter! I have one more to go! Though, I might have to read that in the morning because I have to sleep now. :/

Thanks for the awesome updates! I've been missing out on so much, man...

Hakuna Matata!

-Lara
11/4/2012 c9 Lara D
"About the whole Dapherseed thing, I've realised that it's a really meaningless pairing." -You broke my heart...but it's so true anyways. :/ I liked them together because Sabrina and Puck, Daphne and Mustardseed...I'm an unbelievably inconsiderate and shallow person. :(

I liked how Daphne turned him into a frog. That was funny.

Lol, Puck...
Adam: I know where she lives.
Puck: So you're a stalker too? Wait, you know where her house is?
Adam: That's what I sa-
Puck: BRING ME TO HER.

Enjoyable chapter! :D
-Lara
11/4/2012 c7 Lara D
"Do I look like a maid?" "Well, you know...if you wore one of those black and white dresses..." "Jake, I'm going to pour this glass of water on your coat." -BWAHAHAHAHA.

"There's nothing on it. Wait; is this the Marauder's Map?" "You've been watching Harry Potter, I take it?"-DUDE. NO WAY DID YOU DO THAT. Respect! *highfive!*

"So which language do I say it in?" "Arabic." "Why didn't you tell me that in the first place, then?" "I like seeing you frustrated." -This story is becoming SO entertaining now...

"Let me guess...this is a time turner! I'm right this time...right?" "Afraid not. But it does have something to do with time." "Ugh, stupid Harry Potter, making me get the wrong answers!" "That's right, blame the fictional character." -Died. Legit died.

"You just think really hard-which I know must be hard for you-" -HA. HA. HA. Uncle Jake, poking fun at Puck's supposedly minuscule brain. XD

Over the years Puck had noticed something, they both masked their grief with laughter and smiles. They both pretended that the past didn't hurt them. It was like shouting to the world: "You see? You can try to ruin my life, you can try to destroy me, you can do anything, but it won't make a difference! " -The chapter just turned. I'm crying now. Poor Jake. Poor Puck.

The ending was so sweet though! I absolutely enjoyed the chapter! I hope UJ succeeds in planting all the roses!

-Lara
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