
8/25/2014 c2
5super-sirius-saves-the-day
I really like your writing but I wish you wouldn't use the word "retard"; it's an offensive phrase and, under normal circumstances, would make me stop reading a story altogether. But this is really good so I thought I would just tell you in a review. I love how you keep Puck and Sabrina the same instead of changing them to be some love struck teenagers. Keep writing:)

I really like your writing but I wish you wouldn't use the word "retard"; it's an offensive phrase and, under normal circumstances, would make me stop reading a story altogether. But this is really good so I thought I would just tell you in a review. I love how you keep Puck and Sabrina the same instead of changing them to be some love struck teenagers. Keep writing:)
8/20/2014 c15 Tonaro
Ah please update soon! You're an amazing writer and I look forward to the next chapter. Good luck with your writer's block. I know how that feels QAQ.
Ah please update soon! You're an amazing writer and I look forward to the next chapter. Good luck with your writer's block. I know how that feels QAQ.
8/15/2014 c15 Guest
Please finish this. Soon
Please finish this. Soon
7/22/2014 c15 Jacaranda Penn
I'M READING THIS I really like this story please update it because please
I'M READING THIS I really like this story please update it because please
6/14/2014 c1 SisterGrimmFan347
So I'm doing a challenge and rereading all my favorite stories and this is one of them.:)
So I'm doing a challenge and rereading all my favorite stories and this is one of them.:)
6/12/2014 c15 Guest
please update!
please update!
6/12/2014 c1 Guest
UPDATE!
UPDATE!
6/12/2014 c15 Guest
it's been a month when are you going to update?
it's been a month when are you going to update?
6/9/2014 c1 xXTheGrimmFanXx
Wow this is a great story so far! it's cute but not cheesy or cliche. However I did see some mistakes...
Wow this is a great story so far! it's cute but not cheesy or cliche. However I did see some mistakes...
6/9/2014 c5
10TheSecretCat
But I should probably get back to work now. I'll come reread the rest of this later. Just to remind you to not forget about us again.

But I should probably get back to work now. I'll come reread the rest of this later. Just to remind you to not forget about us again.
6/9/2014 c4 TheSecretCat
I'm also procrastinating on what I'm supposed to be doing today and felt like giving out some positive karma while I do it. I review nasty things enough on this account. Wanted a fic that I'd be able to both be honest and say I enjoyed.
I'm also procrastinating on what I'm supposed to be doing today and felt like giving out some positive karma while I do it. I review nasty things enough on this account. Wanted a fic that I'd be able to both be honest and say I enjoyed.
6/9/2014 c3 TheSecretCat
Also 'cause I wanted to refresh my memory on what happened. It's been a while since I read this fic.
Also 'cause I wanted to refresh my memory on what happened. It's been a while since I read this fic.
6/8/2014 c15 AWEOSME
PLEASE UPDATE! IT'S BEEN MORE THAN A MONTH!
PLEASE UPDATE! IT'S BEEN MORE THAN A MONTH!