for Cold Feet4/15/2012 c4 Red
Hey! I believe in you Puck. ^.^
Anyway...Cute chapter. Oh, and I thought you were going to keep no Puck/Sabrina in it? Well, I liked it anyway. :D It was..SO CUTE!
There was one spelling mistake-at least I THINK it was a spelling mistake. It was towards the start of the chapter : "Good riddance." She muttered to herself.
Shouldn't it be like "good ridd...never mind. That's right. wow, I'm so stupid *face palm*
Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter ^.^ and... I asked my brother (yes, I'm that pathetic) how to pronounce Aisha? and I know that name! I'm so proud *puffs out cheeks* what? you don't think this look is befitting? *blows out breath*
Well, keep it up. oh, and do you have a beta?
~Red (TheAfterShock NLI)
Hey! I believe in you Puck. ^.^
Anyway...Cute chapter. Oh, and I thought you were going to keep no Puck/Sabrina in it? Well, I liked it anyway. :D It was..SO CUTE!
There was one spelling mistake-at least I THINK it was a spelling mistake. It was towards the start of the chapter : "Good riddance." She muttered to herself.
Shouldn't it be like "good ridd...never mind. That's right. wow, I'm so stupid *face palm*
Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter ^.^ and... I asked my brother (yes, I'm that pathetic) how to pronounce Aisha? and I know that name! I'm so proud *puffs out cheeks* what? you don't think this look is befitting? *blows out breath*
Well, keep it up. oh, and do you have a beta?
~Red (TheAfterShock NLI)
4/15/2012 c4 Callirose12
OH MY GIZZLES! YOU MENTIONED ME! 3 TIMES! I'M PUCKBRINA! I WAS PUCKBRINA WHEN I DIDN'T HAVE AN OFFICIAL ACCOUNT! *cries* I've never *sniffs* had *sniffs* anyone *sniffs* mention me before! *sniffs* YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER, AND HILARIOUS! Aisha reminded me of you with that flying shoe part... and it seems that you love writing like her... I don't know you in real life, but it sounds like something you would say from your A/N. But I love your writing! I would buy your book if-what am I saying? WHEN- you write one.:) And I have a perfect excuse to why I reviewed but didn't subscribe (I did now) it's because I didn't have an account. But I do now and that's why I subscribed and everything! Keep writing please!
OH MY GIZZLES! YOU MENTIONED ME! 3 TIMES! I'M PUCKBRINA! I WAS PUCKBRINA WHEN I DIDN'T HAVE AN OFFICIAL ACCOUNT! *cries* I've never *sniffs* had *sniffs* anyone *sniffs* mention me before! *sniffs* YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER, AND HILARIOUS! Aisha reminded me of you with that flying shoe part... and it seems that you love writing like her... I don't know you in real life, but it sounds like something you would say from your A/N. But I love your writing! I would buy your book if-what am I saying? WHEN- you write one.:) And I have a perfect excuse to why I reviewed but didn't subscribe (I did now) it's because I didn't have an account. But I do now and that's why I subscribed and everything! Keep writing please!
4/15/2012 c4 arisha
wow great story...
iam to lazy and tired to write more ...
ill review again soon...
byyyyyiiiiiiiiiiie
wow great story...
iam to lazy and tired to write more ...
ill review again soon...
byyyyyiiiiiiiiiiie
4/15/2012 c4 
1Nature16
Puck writing a book? OMIGOSH! I thought Puck+Book=World Explosion... Or was it Angry Puck and angry Sabrina...? If only the book he would write would be real, He would be the richest fairy. ;)
1Nature16Puck writing a book? OMIGOSH! I thought Puck+Book=World Explosion... Or was it Angry Puck and angry Sabrina...? If only the book he would write would be real, He would be the richest fairy. ;)
4/15/2012 c4 6TheAfterShock
Oh, so you took Red and my advice to tell those people off. Good job. It's about time.
DUDE! You didn't even use the form of Aisha I picked! I'm kinda offended here! But not really cause I wanted to pick that one, but I like 'y's better...
Was it you Red and I were talking to about Puck's career being a writer with a trash column?
All in all, LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
The COOLER Tutti Frutti,
Cat
6TheAfterShockOh, so you took Red and my advice to tell those people off. Good job. It's about time.
DUDE! You didn't even use the form of Aisha I picked! I'm kinda offended here! But not really cause I wanted to pick that one, but I like 'y's better...
Was it you Red and I were talking to about Puck's career being a writer with a trash column?
All in all, LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
The COOLER Tutti Frutti,
Cat
4/15/2012 c4 AwesomenessInaCan
Aw! That actually made me tear up! The hand holding...eeee! xD I love it, please continue rapidamente. :)
Aw! That actually made me tear up! The hand holding...eeee! xD I love it, please continue rapidamente. :)
4/14/2012 c1 Magnificent Maliha
Hey! This is cool,one piece of criticism though I think you should change our profile picture; it don't do you justice. I know it has nothing to do with the piece.
Hey! This is cool,one piece of criticism though I think you should change our profile picture; it don't do you justice. I know it has nothing to do with the piece.
4/13/2012 c3 2hellolittleflowers
Me like-y. Keep writing as fast as you can and put some Sullivan in it, soldier! :) Hut hut! ( or in that in football?)
2hellolittleflowersMe like-y. Keep writing as fast as you can and put some Sullivan in it, soldier! :) Hut hut! ( or in that in football?)
4/11/2012 c3 Hishireenhowsitgoing
Hiiiiii it's meeeeee karina :p goooood stories! Veery creatif :) or I mean creative... Cuz ur feminine ahah
So uhhhh wanna give me a brief explanation of these marshmallow Sullivan Basil granny Sabina characters...?
Hiiiiii it's meeeeee karina :p goooood stories! Veery creatif :) or I mean creative... Cuz ur feminine ahah
So uhhhh wanna give me a brief explanation of these marshmallow Sullivan Basil granny Sabina characters...?
4/10/2012 c3 Airene Archerway NLI
As I said, I'd read this chapter and review.
"I still remember the day when you swore you would never learn anything unless it would get you candy or something equally as good in return!" That made me burst out in hysterical laughter.
I also loved the entire Basil thing, if I wasn't going to die afterwards, I'd totally do that to my sister.
Well, continue writing this, it's awesome!
As for ideas on Conflicted Feelings... Well, there could be asking Sabrina out, or something. That's a cliché. I'm lame at these ideas. I'll stop talking now.
-A
As I said, I'd read this chapter and review.
"I still remember the day when you swore you would never learn anything unless it would get you candy or something equally as good in return!" That made me burst out in hysterical laughter.
I also loved the entire Basil thing, if I wasn't going to die afterwards, I'd totally do that to my sister.
Well, continue writing this, it's awesome!
As for ideas on Conflicted Feelings... Well, there could be asking Sabrina out, or something. That's a cliché. I'm lame at these ideas. I'll stop talking now.
-A
4/9/2012 c3 Delaney
Is there another chapter?
Is there another chapter?
4/9/2012 c3 Puckbrina
Ha I remember that conversation you had in French class with that dumb guy and you told him that he was going to be selling hot dogs on the streets because he doesn't read *shivers* and Sabrina told Puck that he will be selling hot dogs in the street.
I love Cold Feet! Puck, Sabrina, and everyone else never went OOC. Great job!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEE KEEP WRITING! OR ELSE *PUTS ON WARRIOR FACE* I WILL STEAL SULLIVAN FROM YOU! YEAH THAT'S RIGHT, I'LL STEAL YOUR PRECIOUS LITTLE CHIMP! (sorry, went a little bit overboard there. Just do me a little favor, keep writing, maybe about Puck's first day at the university, and I won't steal Sulli, 'Kay?)
Ha I remember that conversation you had in French class with that dumb guy and you told him that he was going to be selling hot dogs on the streets because he doesn't read *shivers* and Sabrina told Puck that he will be selling hot dogs in the street.
I love Cold Feet! Puck, Sabrina, and everyone else never went OOC. Great job!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEE KEEP WRITING! OR ELSE *PUTS ON WARRIOR FACE* I WILL STEAL SULLIVAN FROM YOU! YEAH THAT'S RIGHT, I'LL STEAL YOUR PRECIOUS LITTLE CHIMP! (sorry, went a little bit overboard there. Just do me a little favor, keep writing, maybe about Puck's first day at the university, and I won't steal Sulli, 'Kay?)
4/9/2012 c2 Puckbrina
AWWW! The little monk-er, chimp- is so cute! I will never forget about you!
This second chapter was great! I know, I know, I'm so behind, but I just found this amazing site today so you guys can't blame me. You're a pucktastic writer, SweetShireen. I will keep reading your poems and stories for as long as long as you write them (which I hope is really long). You are the graviest writer ever! You are much-o artistic-o!
I cried a little bit during this chapter. I hate it when my favorite characters grow older. (even in fan-fiction) Or when the series is done (the last book comes out next month! :**( *cries*) I want to read it but I don't! I'm on the 6th book, but my Kindle Fire died, and I left my charger at my Grandma's who lives 2 hours away, soo :( I'm mad. Like Sabrina-after-Puck-pranks-her mad.
Well, keep writing, SweetShireen!
AWWW! The little monk-er, chimp- is so cute! I will never forget about you!
This second chapter was great! I know, I know, I'm so behind, but I just found this amazing site today so you guys can't blame me. You're a pucktastic writer, SweetShireen. I will keep reading your poems and stories for as long as long as you write them (which I hope is really long). You are the graviest writer ever! You are much-o artistic-o!
I cried a little bit during this chapter. I hate it when my favorite characters grow older. (even in fan-fiction) Or when the series is done (the last book comes out next month! :**( *cries*) I want to read it but I don't! I'm on the 6th book, but my Kindle Fire died, and I left my charger at my Grandma's who lives 2 hours away, soo :( I'm mad. Like Sabrina-after-Puck-pranks-her mad.
Well, keep writing, SweetShireen!