for Cold Feet4/9/2012 c1 Puckbrina
Ha your Author's Notes are hilarious! They make me crack up so much.
I love this first chapter. I gasped when I found out Sabrina was in the room. I like this story. I also love your poems! your a pucktastic writer! And I don't say pucktastic lightly, for I, Puckbrina, is his biggest fan ever!
Ha your Author's Notes are hilarious! They make me crack up so much.
I love this first chapter. I gasped when I found out Sabrina was in the room. I like this story. I also love your poems! your a pucktastic writer! And I don't say pucktastic lightly, for I, Puckbrina, is his biggest fan ever!
4/4/2012 c3 Big Sister
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4/3/2012 c3 TheAfterShock NLI
Yesssss! i knew it! I was like, you know what? I bet Puck's plan will back fire on him...
And I was right? I'm the greatest...sloth ever! (if aardvark is bad, then sloth is good right?)
Well, there was one grammar mistake. but, I read this a while ago, and I'm not going to bother looking or it. at the bottom somewhere. :)
well, I really liked it! It was...cutesy! Yes, I just called a chapter cute is that possible?
~Red
Yesssss! i knew it! I was like, you know what? I bet Puck's plan will back fire on him...
And I was right? I'm the greatest...sloth ever! (if aardvark is bad, then sloth is good right?)
Well, there was one grammar mistake. but, I read this a while ago, and I'm not going to bother looking or it. at the bottom somewhere. :)
well, I really liked it! It was...cutesy! Yes, I just called a chapter cute is that possible?
~Red
4/2/2012 c3 jfdnvdjfgerg
OHMYLOVELYFRIEDBEANS!
I literaly sighed in relief when Puck saw the letter...and LOLed a little ;)
OHMYLOVELYFRIEDBEANS!
I literaly sighed in relief when Puck saw the letter...and LOLed a little ;)
4/2/2012 c3 1234568900987654321
That was a great twist. So Puck and Sabrina are going to the NYU together! Yay! Update soon!
That was a great twist. So Puck and Sabrina are going to the NYU together! Yay! Update soon!
4/2/2012 c3 arisha
OMG puck got into university!
hahaha i like the way you made basil,
MSeed was a little to u know too professionaland all that
but i love how u made alittle DaphSeed I know you're growing up for the Marshmallow, don't deny it!
and a lttle puckabrina ...AWSOME!
HAHAHAHAHAHA OHH WOW, PUCK, SUCH A FAIL!
please continue this chapter!
~ARISHA
OMG puck got into university!
hahaha i like the way you made basil,
MSeed was a little to u know too professionaland all that
but i love how u made alittle DaphSeed I know you're growing up for the Marshmallow, don't deny it!
and a lttle puckabrina ...AWSOME!
HAHAHAHAHAHA OHH WOW, PUCK, SUCH A FAIL!
please continue this chapter!
~ARISHA
4/2/2012 c3 A forgetful PenguinLoverGurl
PenguinLoverGurl, here. I forgots something:
OMIGOOSHNESS! YOU HAVE TO ADD MORE CHAPTERS! I STILL HAVE THOSE MATCHES AND FIREWORKS! And guess what else I found? *devilish smile* }:] I found duct tape and bunches of bananas..so what would happen if I 'accidentally' taped the bananas to your hands and told Sulls that you stole them? MUAHAHAHAHAHA *cough cough* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
PenguinLoverGurl, here. I forgots something:
OMIGOOSHNESS! YOU HAVE TO ADD MORE CHAPTERS! I STILL HAVE THOSE MATCHES AND FIREWORKS! And guess what else I found? *devilish smile* }:] I found duct tape and bunches of bananas..so what would happen if I 'accidentally' taped the bananas to your hands and told Sulls that you stole them? MUAHAHAHAHAHA *cough cough* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
4/2/2012 c3 PenguinLoverGurl
Awesomesaucily wondersometastical!
I like how you got his family together, and the devastation of not being excepted, and the joy of being accepted and...well, youget my point.
Don't worry, I've locked the fireworks in my imaginary fireproof box. But don't get too excited. I still haves matches! MUAHAHAHAHA!
Awesomesaucily wondersometastical!
I like how you got his family together, and the devastation of not being excepted, and the joy of being accepted and...well, youget my point.
Don't worry, I've locked the fireworks in my imaginary fireproof box. But don't get too excited. I still haves matches! MUAHAHAHAHA!
4/2/2012 c3 
4AvaJane17
That was really cute :3 Puck actually shaped up though, which was surprising. I think everyone reactions probably got to him after a while, but eh. And I loved the ending :) Priceless :D
4AvaJane17That was really cute :3 Puck actually shaped up though, which was surprising. I think everyone reactions probably got to him after a while, but eh. And I loved the ending :) Priceless :D
4/2/2012 c3 26Lara D
I actually started tearing up reading this. Puck sounded so...depressed. I'm really glad he got in to the school he wanted though. It makes me realize that there are SOME people who try to change, but they still don't get to where they want to be. It's a bit sad, really. But this chapter/one-shot was great -it really was. I liked the small Puckabrina -as always- and started grinning like a maniac. .
Now, I must sort through the almost 100 reviews in my inbox. D: So...many...
But before I go, hakuna matata! XD
~Lara
26Lara DI actually started tearing up reading this. Puck sounded so...depressed. I'm really glad he got in to the school he wanted though. It makes me realize that there are SOME people who try to change, but they still don't get to where they want to be. It's a bit sad, really. But this chapter/one-shot was great -it really was. I liked the small Puckabrina -as always- and started grinning like a maniac. .
Now, I must sort through the almost 100 reviews in my inbox. D: So...many...
But before I go, hakuna matata! XD
~Lara
4/2/2012 c3 DayNight
I think you should make this longer. I haaaaaaattttttteeeee cliffhangers so bad. Puck should explain to Sabrina, and she would say something witty about it. That would an extremely short chapter, so maybe it could be a flashback in a chapter? I'm just thinking, okay?
I think you should make this longer. I haaaaaaattttttteeeee cliffhangers so bad. Puck should explain to Sabrina, and she would say something witty about it. That would an extremely short chapter, so maybe it could be a flashback in a chapter? I'm just thinking, okay?
4/2/2012 c3 6TheAfterShock
I like your version of Basil. :D
I kinda thought that Tatiana's argument was... Lame and unconvincing. But that's just me.
Fav. line:
" "... I still remember the day when you swore you would never learn anything unless it would get you candy or something equally as good in return!" " Pure awesome ^.^
You should continue, but maybe not fifty chapters...
We should settle this right now. Out of me and you, I'm obviously the cooler Tuttie Frutti. :) Embrace it.
Cat
6TheAfterShockI like your version of Basil. :D
I kinda thought that Tatiana's argument was... Lame and unconvincing. But that's just me.
Fav. line:
" "... I still remember the day when you swore you would never learn anything unless it would get you candy or something equally as good in return!" " Pure awesome ^.^
You should continue, but maybe not fifty chapters...
We should settle this right now. Out of me and you, I'm obviously the cooler Tuttie Frutti. :) Embrace it.
Cat