for Cold Feet4/1/2012 c3 puckabrina-FAXfan
WHY? WHY DID YOU STOP THERE? UPDATE! xD OMG HAHAHAHHA Idk why I'm luaghing at that but its funny! xD
WHY? WHY DID YOU STOP THERE? UPDATE! xD OMG HAHAHAHHA Idk why I'm luaghing at that but its funny! xD
4/1/2012 c2 coco
eehhhh socks are... just well socks.
and soo that is the end of my review
tootles
eehhhh socks are... just well socks.
and soo that is the end of my review
tootles
3/28/2012 c1 TheAfterShock NLI
Ok...here I am...I'm sorry it took me so long :(
This is seriously a beautiful story. I love how they don't just fall in love within the first chapter. only a few stories are great like that. not even mine is like that...:)
I hope your planning on making this a full fledged story- like 10 chapters long! seriously. Do it.
There was like...one spelling/grammar mistake...but i'm to lazy to find it.
I really like this story, but I hate when people just review- I love it, keep going!
cause that's not giving you a lot to go on. Even though, I'm pretty sure I've been responsible for a couple of those reviews myself *looks down saddly* I know, I'm a hypocripe. ( wish I could remembber how to spell that...)
Well, Keep going, seriously. And...Good keeping Puck out of OOC-ness. It's hard to keep him good old puck style :)
~Red
Ok...here I am...I'm sorry it took me so long :(
This is seriously a beautiful story. I love how they don't just fall in love within the first chapter. only a few stories are great like that. not even mine is like that...:)
I hope your planning on making this a full fledged story- like 10 chapters long! seriously. Do it.
There was like...one spelling/grammar mistake...but i'm to lazy to find it.
I really like this story, but I hate when people just review- I love it, keep going!
cause that's not giving you a lot to go on. Even though, I'm pretty sure I've been responsible for a couple of those reviews myself *looks down saddly* I know, I'm a hypocripe. ( wish I could remembber how to spell that...)
Well, Keep going, seriously. And...Good keeping Puck out of OOC-ness. It's hard to keep him good old puck style :)
~Red
3/28/2012 c2 
7GoSammyKeyes
Wow! Your a really good writer! I loved how you didn't make it all chessy(sorry can't spell) and make them makeout at the end
7GoSammyKeyesWow! Your a really good writer! I loved how you didn't make it all chessy(sorry can't spell) and make them makeout at the end
3/27/2012 c1 AwesomenessInaCan
Ahaha, I love it. You're a fantastic writer, this is definitely one of th ebest fics I've seen. :)
Ahaha, I love it. You're a fantastic writer, this is definitely one of th ebest fics I've seen. :)
3/27/2012 c2 ANannyMouse
Hi! So I like, completely forgot that you had another story! And I'm super sad that I did!
This was so CUTE! :D I love it! You should write more stories like this. Or, ya know, stories in general... Haha, 'cause the poems are really nice, but you seem to have a good grasp on non-OOCness. So I congratulate you. ;)
There were just a couple minor typos here and there and a couple of weirdly phrased sentences, but it's not something a realt quick edit couldn't fix! ;D
I think you should continue it! 'Cause there are so many different birthdays you could use! 21, 30, 60... To name a few. Or his golden or silver birthdays. And they're just so CUTE! Ah!
So yeah. Good job and I'm SO sorry for not reading/reviewing earlier. I kinda blanked on that... But I think it's a cute idea that should be continued! Okay. I'm done. ;D
Hi! So I like, completely forgot that you had another story! And I'm super sad that I did!
This was so CUTE! :D I love it! You should write more stories like this. Or, ya know, stories in general... Haha, 'cause the poems are really nice, but you seem to have a good grasp on non-OOCness. So I congratulate you. ;)
There were just a couple minor typos here and there and a couple of weirdly phrased sentences, but it's not something a realt quick edit couldn't fix! ;D
I think you should continue it! 'Cause there are so many different birthdays you could use! 21, 30, 60... To name a few. Or his golden or silver birthdays. And they're just so CUTE! Ah!
So yeah. Good job and I'm SO sorry for not reading/reviewing earlier. I kinda blanked on that... But I think it's a cute idea that should be continued! Okay. I'm done. ;D
3/23/2012 c2 2creamychocpudding786
I reviewed because I care about Sullivan. Anyway, I LOVE it sooooooo much! Also, since they are 18 now, you should make it puckabrina-ish and have Puck propose! Then you should write about their life after and have Sabrina get pregnant, blah blah blah... It would be a GREAT story! You should name the child...Sophie. It sounds innocent and cute, but inside she is a miniature Puck, a trickster!...Just waiting to attack Aunt Daphne...I love it! keep on updating!
2creamychocpudding786I reviewed because I care about Sullivan. Anyway, I LOVE it sooooooo much! Also, since they are 18 now, you should make it puckabrina-ish and have Puck propose! Then you should write about their life after and have Sabrina get pregnant, blah blah blah... It would be a GREAT story! You should name the child...Sophie. It sounds innocent and cute, but inside she is a miniature Puck, a trickster!...Just waiting to attack Aunt Daphne...I love it! keep on updating!
3/18/2012 c2 1Nature16
yeahhhh, i couldnt review because th keyboard on my ipod wont cooperate with me... SO! anyways, this was a really good chap. Especially if youre in the library on the VERY uncomfortable chairs.
1Nature16yeahhhh, i couldnt review because th keyboard on my ipod wont cooperate with me... SO! anyways, this was a really good chap. Especially if youre in the library on the VERY uncomfortable chairs.
3/18/2012 c2 Big Sister
Hello!
So,so glad you updated!
I was so bored until you did.
I bet you can guess what I am going to write.
Yep! I just love your poems and story's!
Oh...and don't say my name on the internet please!
It embarrassed me.
BYE
Hello!
So,so glad you updated!
I was so bored until you did.
I bet you can guess what I am going to write.
Yep! I just love your poems and story's!
Oh...and don't say my name on the internet please!
It embarrassed me.
BYE
3/17/2012 c2 arisha
"Puck? Why is that guy in green tights staring at you?" She asked innocently.
He swirled around. "Where is he?"
In that precious moment, Sabrina snatched the cupcake back, broke half of it, and stuffed it in her mouth. Who cared about manners now? She was starving.
Puck watched her with dismay. "My beautiful cupcake…How could you?"
She wiped the crumbs off her mouth. "It was easy. And shut up. I left you the bigger piece."
that was really funny! why did u have to stop at the worst part!
please please continue and make a another chapter!
"Puck? Why is that guy in green tights staring at you?" She asked innocently.
He swirled around. "Where is he?"
In that precious moment, Sabrina snatched the cupcake back, broke half of it, and stuffed it in her mouth. Who cared about manners now? She was starving.
Puck watched her with dismay. "My beautiful cupcake…How could you?"
She wiped the crumbs off her mouth. "It was easy. And shut up. I left you the bigger piece."
that was really funny! why did u have to stop at the worst part!
please please continue and make a another chapter!
3/17/2012 c2 26Lara D
His face had gone pale in the moonlight and he stood there motionless. *poke* Puck doesn't move. "Puck? Stop freaking me out! What happened you idiot?"
"Can you not see that this is the biggest moment of my life? It's 11:58! Just two minutes until I turn eighteen! Gah, what am I supposed to do?" LOL. Favorite part.
"Is it food? No fair! You can't deprive me of my right! I'll set my minions after you!" He cried out. -I think "set" was supposed to be "send".
Is this a series of one-shots? Because that's interesting. Now to serious business: HA! You thought I wouldn't review! XD I finally got around to doing so. Now I must doze off. Goodanighta! Zzzzz...
-Lara
26Lara DHis face had gone pale in the moonlight and he stood there motionless. *poke* Puck doesn't move. "Puck? Stop freaking me out! What happened you idiot?"
"Can you not see that this is the biggest moment of my life? It's 11:58! Just two minutes until I turn eighteen! Gah, what am I supposed to do?" LOL. Favorite part.
"Is it food? No fair! You can't deprive me of my right! I'll set my minions after you!" He cried out. -I think "set" was supposed to be "send".
Is this a series of one-shots? Because that's interesting. Now to serious business: HA! You thought I wouldn't review! XD I finally got around to doing so. Now I must doze off. Goodanighta! Zzzzz...
-Lara