for Cold Feet3/17/2012 c2 1234568900987654321
I loved this chapter! It was really funny. I think you should do more cliche mocking like the jacket, except in the this stupid not the awwww way!
I loved this chapter! It was really funny. I think you should do more cliche mocking like the jacket, except in the this stupid not the awwww way!
3/17/2012 c2 PenguinLoverGurl
YAY! I AM A HAPPY DUCKLING! Thank you so very much from the bottom of my ducky heart for not making this a one shot! Thank you, Sulls, for making her not make me make you make her make this a one shot! I give you fireworks and a lighter! WOOOOOOO!
Girl, with an ending as awesome and suspensful as that, you HAVE to add another chap. No kidzies. If you don't, I'll take away the fireworks and lighter and tell Sulls that you told me to. }:-} MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Happy duckling dance time!
-PLG
YAY! I AM A HAPPY DUCKLING! Thank you so very much from the bottom of my ducky heart for not making this a one shot! Thank you, Sulls, for making her not make me make you make her make this a one shot! I give you fireworks and a lighter! WOOOOOOO!
Girl, with an ending as awesome and suspensful as that, you HAVE to add another chap. No kidzies. If you don't, I'll take away the fireworks and lighter and tell Sulls that you told me to. }:-} MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Happy duckling dance time!
-PLG
3/17/2012 c2 
16archerway-a
Coward he is running away from Sabrina's wrath. Well, I would too, but...
So, I am contributing two reviews! Be proud of me! But I know how you feel, do you know how many visitors are there on Dear FanFiction Writers? 1K! Do you know how many reviews I have? 105! Grr...
Do Everafters have birthdays? I'm wondering... Because, I never really thought of that. I expected Daphne to do something Puckabrina-ish. Well, she did, (I BET I'M GETTING AN O IN DIVINATION!) Once again, the Characters are In Character. And I loved the potato butt insult and your reference to the movie cliché. I love cheesy chick flicks. Even if I'm only ten.
I can't wait for this story to update!
-A
16archerway-aCoward he is running away from Sabrina's wrath. Well, I would too, but...
So, I am contributing two reviews! Be proud of me! But I know how you feel, do you know how many visitors are there on Dear FanFiction Writers? 1K! Do you know how many reviews I have? 105! Grr...
Do Everafters have birthdays? I'm wondering... Because, I never really thought of that. I expected Daphne to do something Puckabrina-ish. Well, she did, (I BET I'M GETTING AN O IN DIVINATION!) Once again, the Characters are In Character. And I loved the potato butt insult and your reference to the movie cliché. I love cheesy chick flicks. Even if I'm only ten.
I can't wait for this story to update!
-A
3/17/2012 c1 archerway-a
OK! OK! I'm reviewin' Sulli!
I love how you added a little Dapherseed in there along with the Puckabrina. I love Dapherseed... a lot.
Sorry I didn't review.. The internet was slow the first time.
I feel bad for Puck, I never knew that the Trickster King could get scared.
Pfft. Of course the Trickster King could get scared.
Well, the characters are in character. (Characters In Character :)) And Imma read the next chapter now.
-A
OK! OK! I'm reviewin' Sulli!
I love how you added a little Dapherseed in there along with the Puckabrina. I love Dapherseed... a lot.
Sorry I didn't review.. The internet was slow the first time.
I feel bad for Puck, I never knew that the Trickster King could get scared.
Pfft. Of course the Trickster King could get scared.
Well, the characters are in character. (Characters In Character :)) And Imma read the next chapter now.
-A
3/16/2012 c2 Kathie
*lies and pretends she wasn't reading it* sorry, it's 1am here and so I want to get to bed. I'll review later, I promise. For now, I just want to say that your stories are always THE BEST. Never OOC, you always interpret the characters perfectly. If your profile picture wasn't of a teenage girl, I swear I'd think you were the great almighty MB. :) more later. Just, keep doing this story, it's unicorn. ;)
*lies and pretends she wasn't reading it* sorry, it's 1am here and so I want to get to bed. I'll review later, I promise. For now, I just want to say that your stories are always THE BEST. Never OOC, you always interpret the characters perfectly. If your profile picture wasn't of a teenage girl, I swear I'd think you were the great almighty MB. :) more later. Just, keep doing this story, it's unicorn. ;)
3/16/2012 c2 4AvaJane17
Uh uh, keep going! I liked the time skippy thing as well, and am now kind of wondering if Pucks birthday is what this story revolve around? And also, just a quick question, is Sabrina older than Puck? Or younger?
4AvaJane17Uh uh, keep going! I liked the time skippy thing as well, and am now kind of wondering if Pucks birthday is what this story revolve around? And also, just a quick question, is Sabrina older than Puck? Or younger?
3/16/2012 c2 Day Night
Smart monkey - chimp! You get a cookie!
Smart monkey - chimp! You get a cookie!
3/16/2012 c2 6TheAfterShock
Who said that I'm reading this? HOW DID YOU KNOW? ;)
There were a couple grammar mistakes that I won't bother pointing out 'cause in lazy. Awesome job, though! At the 'give me your coat' scene I was like, 'I'm so gonna tell her off if he gives her the coat' but I'm ok with how you did it. :D
If if wasn't supposed to be funny then I'm sorry, but I was laughing the whole time.
Cat
6TheAfterShockWho said that I'm reading this? HOW DID YOU KNOW? ;)
There were a couple grammar mistakes that I won't bother pointing out 'cause in lazy. Awesome job, though! At the 'give me your coat' scene I was like, 'I'm so gonna tell her off if he gives her the coat' but I'm ok with how you did it. :D
If if wasn't supposed to be funny then I'm sorry, but I was laughing the whole time.
Cat
3/15/2012 c1 arisha
wow you arnt only good at writing poems but at stories two!
i thought it was really good , i couldnt stop laughing at the part The chimp jumped up and down, scratched its armpits and finally brought out a small black item.
and how it was sabrina on the phone and not Daphne cause i thought daphne was saying something about sabrina likin puck...but i was wrong still it was good:D
please tell me there is gonna be a next chapter!
please please:D
~ your loving sister Arisha
hope this made u happy!
wow you arnt only good at writing poems but at stories two!
i thought it was really good , i couldnt stop laughing at the part The chimp jumped up and down, scratched its armpits and finally brought out a small black item.
and how it was sabrina on the phone and not Daphne cause i thought daphne was saying something about sabrina likin puck...but i was wrong still it was good:D
please tell me there is gonna be a next chapter!
please please:D
~ your loving sister Arisha
hope this made u happy!
3/14/2012 c1 5turtlesruinedmylife
LoL! "He's a chimpanzee!" Loved that line! Great Story! I like how you ended it. I was actually expecting one of those cliche heart to heart things that end with a kiss! Thank you for not doing that!
5turtlesruinedmylifeLoL! "He's a chimpanzee!" Loved that line! Great Story! I like how you ended it. I was actually expecting one of those cliche heart to heart things that end with a kiss! Thank you for not doing that!
3/14/2012 c1 Me
Oh my gosh! This was really good! Is it just s one shot I really hope not! Agh your soo good!
Oh my gosh! This was really good! Is it just s one shot I really hope not! Agh your soo good!
3/13/2012 c1 PenguinLoverGurl
I have a chimpanzee beanie baby hanging from my fan. How could I forget you, Sulls? Anyway, love the story. Is this a one-shot? Please say no. Please.
I have a chimpanzee beanie baby hanging from my fan. How could I forget you, Sulls? Anyway, love the story. Is this a one-shot? Please say no. Please.
3/13/2012 c1 Kathie
Unicorn. :P
Unicorn. :P