for Cold Feet3/13/2012 c1 Lara D NLI
...UGH! I AM SO FREAKIN' JEALOUS OF YOU! :D I really believed this was MB writing until I remembered this was FanFiction. Goshdarnit -you're so good. So great at writing. I admit defeat -you're too good. Take my words to heart.
There was an error close to the bottom -you forgot a closing quotation mark somewhere -I can't exactly remember. But asides that, it was really awesome! I love how it was Sabrina who had Daphne's phone -I thought that was a worthy Lol moment. ^^
Awesome story! I really REALLY am going to appreciate your work fully now -anyone who can write like MB is Amazing -with a capital A.
I shall read your update on ITI (the poems)!
-Lara
...UGH! I AM SO FREAKIN' JEALOUS OF YOU! :D I really believed this was MB writing until I remembered this was FanFiction. Goshdarnit -you're so good. So great at writing. I admit defeat -you're too good. Take my words to heart.
There was an error close to the bottom -you forgot a closing quotation mark somewhere -I can't exactly remember. But asides that, it was really awesome! I love how it was Sabrina who had Daphne's phone -I thought that was a worthy Lol moment. ^^
Awesome story! I really REALLY am going to appreciate your work fully now -anyone who can write like MB is Amazing -with a capital A.
I shall read your update on ITI (the poems)!
-Lara
3/13/2012 c1 TheyCallMeRed
*sigh* I love sulli. *yells* You're great sulli, and don't forget it.
Puck, so cute. I love it! The whole texting thing...made me laugh.
Is there a second chapter?
*sigh* I love sulli. *yells* You're great sulli, and don't forget it.
Puck, so cute. I love it! The whole texting thing...made me laugh.
Is there a second chapter?
3/13/2012 c1 Demigod536
:'3 awe that was so cute, I loved it. 3
:'3 awe that was so cute, I loved it. 3
3/13/2012 c1 
6TheAfterShock
Sullivan, don't be goin' mushy on me.
Random quote time!
"Hi, Sulli Wulli."
"Hey, Ceilia... Weilia."
ANYWAY! Coolness, I've seen similar things but yours wasn't all mushy. I like it. A lot. :)
NO, YOURE THE FRIGGIN TUTTI FRUTTI!
Cat
6TheAfterShockSullivan, don't be goin' mushy on me.
Random quote time!
"Hi, Sulli Wulli."
"Hey, Ceilia... Weilia."
ANYWAY! Coolness, I've seen similar things but yours wasn't all mushy. I like it. A lot. :)
NO, YOURE THE FRIGGIN TUTTI FRUTTI!
Cat
3/13/2012 c1 Big Sister
Hello!
I love your story.
It is very funny and well written.
I think when you grow-up you should be a writter.
So well that's my opinion...Bye!
Hello!
I love your story.
It is very funny and well written.
I think when you grow-up you should be a writter.
So well that's my opinion...Bye!