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3/30/2019 c1 1k+Val-Creative
Ohhhhh this is so neat! :D The italics are a liiiittle distracting but they do serve a purpose and I know people complain about an overuse of ellipsis but those people suck and I love when ellipses are used like this aaaah it feels like everything is more weighted so YAY GOOD JOB
7/8/2015 c1 Shinigamichick39
I just actually got up to this part in the gameD he's too cute Aki! thanks for this cute story
4/20/2013 c1 3I'm Doxophobic
Soft, intricate, subtle. I felt like you really thought about which words to use, and how the moment did not feel like it was rushed. I like how she was portrayed as feminine without sacrificing confidence in her character. I liked the bit too about not smiling (or did I interpret that wrongly?), because it would make Akihiko further embarrassed. This is the kind of the protagonist that knows him so well, it's beautiful. :D
6/18/2012 c1 18RuinsoftheMoonVII
kyaaa this was so cute! x3 I love this pairing 3

hehe, you brought more emotion and life to that scene from the game loved it!
6/16/2012 c1 41Miss Hanamura
Ho man, I've been meaning to read this little ficlet of yours, and now I finally am... Did... Yup xD

But goodness, this is absolutely adorable! Your writing is just so... Wow! Great explanation of their relationship, and I love how you stayed true to the Social Link.
4/9/2012 c1 12Mage of Hope
So cute! But I wish u continued more!
4/2/2012 c1 9BrokenAria
That was so cute! It was nice to have an expansion and more in depth version of the scene :)

Good job!
3/15/2012 c1 11Jonaleepuff
It's cute! I'd just like it to stray from the in-game dialogue a bit more. Looking forward to reading more, though!

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