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6/28/2012 c1 6Tempe4Booth
i mean no offense but i think it's just WRONG to put tony and gibbs together they have a father and son relationship all my brain can process is EWWWWWWWWWWWW but the other stuff seems good
4/29/2012 c4 Madame Holly Snow
Very out of character for both your White Collar and NCIS characters. I do not even recognize them in parts. This seems to be a case of good plot in your head, not transferred to the page very well. My advice, if you only get 1 review in 4 chapters quit writing it, take it down and try to figure out what went wrong.

There are bad stories out there look at Anny385, Herky, and others for what not to do. You could do well if someone takes you under their wing and helps you out a bit. Don't give up just seek some help.
3/14/2012 c1 Rebekah Zellers
Great solid start! Can't wait to see where you go from here. He's in good hands with Gibbs.

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