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10/18/2014 c5 4reendesu
Okay, so you're a sixth grader. KID POWER HYAH! (7th grader here :P) And well, how would you be mean? I mean, how do you act? It depends. Also, I've still no idea what Maximum Ride is, but, keep in mind what a Mary Sue is and prevent the Mary Sue trend in writers.
10/18/2014 c1 reendesu
I've honestly no idea of what "Maximum Ride" is, but I mean, I saw your profile on Young Justice fanfiction and then your awesome profile pic which I thought was related to Hawkgirl in some way, but I see your stories and no trace. I just thought I'd go see what stories you have because I'm too bored. I'm weird. Also, your grammar needs work in this first chapter. Keep going.
1/21/2013 c6 3NinaT2000
DON' REDO THE STORY! tha is the worse thing to do with such a good stary. and abt the mean comment, i dont think u r ur friends think u r mean, it doesnt mean ur rude, maybe u just have a different sense pf humor
6/25/2012 c6 5FrenchFrylovesMaximumRide
it is not terrible! all you need to do is tweak it a bit!
6/25/2012 c5 FrenchFrylovesMaximumRide
you are not mean! i do think it is funny though how you say, 7 reviews for next chapter, but post it anyways. I do that too!
6/25/2012 c3 FrenchFrylovesMaximumRide
its really good, but it would be easier to read if you put it like:

"Hi," said Bill.

"Hello, Bill," said Suzy.

"What are you doing?" asked Bill.

"Eating chocolate!" exclaimed Suzy.

"Where did you get it?" inquired Bill.

"The dog dropped it," stated Suzy.

"Where is the dog?" asked Bill.

"The dog is behind the door," said Suzy.

"What is the dog doing?" questioned Bill.

"The dog is making more!" exclaimed Suzy.

instead of it all running together.
3/16/2012 c2 4readingisdabest
I love your/my story.

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