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8Let Me BeLazy
Your story is quite good however, a few of the detail or so to speak were how to say... a bit lacking. I wouldn't say this isn't just my opinion but I found this OC quite lacking and somewhat stupid.
8Let Me BeLazyYour story is quite good however, a few of the detail or so to speak were how to say... a bit lacking. I wouldn't say this isn't just my opinion but I found this OC quite lacking and somewhat stupid.
11/13/2019 c2 Guest
Another pathetic author that has a similarly pathetic oc.
Another pathetic author that has a similarly pathetic oc.
10/7/2019 c3 91TMI Fairy
How did the MC know that Siesta will be abused and that it is not Her Big Break?
91TMI FairyHow did the MC know that Siesta will be abused and that it is not Her Big Break?
10/1/2019 c15 Brabbit Lohan
Can you stop making the MC so pathetic every fight?
Every goddamn fight that happens MC gets injured at start or something, then struggles to win. EVERY GODDAMN FUCKING FIGHT. Isn't he supposed to be uber strong with all his spell knowledge, why is he always on the verge of death...
this is fucking retarded.
Reading many zero novels i have noticed that a lot of RETARDED stuff happens in all of them so far. Maybe only retards write novels for this anime.
Can you stop making the MC so pathetic every fight?
Every goddamn fight that happens MC gets injured at start or something, then struggles to win. EVERY GODDAMN FUCKING FIGHT. Isn't he supposed to be uber strong with all his spell knowledge, why is he always on the verge of death...
this is fucking retarded.
Reading many zero novels i have noticed that a lot of RETARDED stuff happens in all of them so far. Maybe only retards write novels for this anime.
10/1/2019 c9 Brabbit Lohan
WHAT IN THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU AUTHOR ARE YOU BRAINDEAD?
Why the fuck they need to retreat and leave him behind? Wardes is a fucking captain, fight you motherfucer that is the reason you are there not to run away.
MOTHERFUCKING RETARDED
WHAT IN THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU AUTHOR ARE YOU BRAINDEAD?
Why the fuck they need to retreat and leave him behind? Wardes is a fucking captain, fight you motherfucer that is the reason you are there not to run away.
MOTHERFUCKING RETARDED
8/5/2018 c18 mdhunter111
Great job with this story so far. Can’t help but wonder why I never found it before. Looking forward to the next chapter, and have a nice weekend. :)
Great job with this story so far. Can’t help but wonder why I never found it before. Looking forward to the next chapter, and have a nice weekend. :)
1/30/2017 c17 SilentXD7
I hope you continue with the series one day and I see great potential in this story.
I hope you continue with the series one day and I see great potential in this story.
7/23/2016 c18 Sinlessaxe
I think 'IansInsane' summed it up perfectly in a previous review, this story is one of those very special diamonds in the rough. This story was brilliant and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Definitely a shame there has been no update in so long.
I think 'IansInsane' summed it up perfectly in a previous review, this story is one of those very special diamonds in the rough. This story was brilliant and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Definitely a shame there has been no update in so long.
3/18/2016 c16 6Waki Paki
I enjoy the series this far, but I REALLY think you need to fix a few things. You don't say who is talking after they say something, so it can be hard to follow the conversation. Grammatically, there are quite a few errors, most namely not having commas where there should be. I'd recommend a beta reader. But besides that, I am super looking forward to the next chapter.
6Waki PakiI enjoy the series this far, but I REALLY think you need to fix a few things. You don't say who is talking after they say something, so it can be hard to follow the conversation. Grammatically, there are quite a few errors, most namely not having commas where there should be. I'd recommend a beta reader. But besides that, I am super looking forward to the next chapter.
9/27/2015 c18 Paragon the Half-Dragon
Wow... This is good work! I'd really like to see Therum get all his shit back. Though seeing as this hasn't been updated in 2 years, it seems unlikely.
Great OC. I like how well he reacts with everybody, instead of just being immediately accepted by all and how his relationship with Louise is a work in progress.
Wow... This is good work! I'd really like to see Therum get all his shit back. Though seeing as this hasn't been updated in 2 years, it seems unlikely.
Great OC. I like how well he reacts with everybody, instead of just being immediately accepted by all and how his relationship with Louise is a work in progress.
8/4/2015 c18 Tylerear11
I really enjoy this and wish that it will be updated. This is one of my favorite fics on this site and I am sad to know that this will likely not get updated since the last time it was was over two years ago.
I really enjoy this and wish that it will be updated. This is one of my favorite fics on this site and I am sad to know that this will likely not get updated since the last time it was was over two years ago.