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11/20/2012 c1 45roque872002
3 this is perfect! I love it!
6/21/2012 c1 10Procrastinating Fan Girl
So cute x
3/22/2012 c1 35andriaallen
I love this. I really do, great job!
3/20/2012 c1 LadyMo
A wonderful promise he kept. To love someone that much is painful and wonderful at the same time.

3/20/2012 c1 RhizOneill
3/20/2012 c1 dpdp
Very nice.
3/19/2012 c1 Yol
Although this was short, it was right to the point and the words were so touching. Thanks for sharing.
3/19/2012 c1 1steadfast
3/19/2012 c1 88Arones
I love that its such a simple and "normal" moment that happens for him to realize this...that its not some life or death situation that they're being in becuase it seems that life or death has become noraml for them, its mundane and everyday. This is not so the simplicity of it seems so fitting and natural. I love it!

This is well written, and if any of your other writing is like this I so want to read it!
3/19/2012 c1 15SapereAude03
Beautiful! I agree with your other reviewer: "baby" is a bit out of character for Jack, drop it and it'll be perfect! :)
3/19/2012 c1 106gatehead81
Aw very sweet :) and so close to perfect. Drop the word 'baby' and you are there. Thanks for a beautiful contribution :)

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