for Vacation, Interrupted7/9/2015 c1 
10zendog
Another brilliant exploration of the emotional after effects of an horrific experience. Once again this is clearly and beautifully written, with enough empathy and feelings to bring us into the characters mind yet so so much that it becomes mawkish and trite. So well balanced.
10zendogAnother brilliant exploration of the emotional after effects of an horrific experience. Once again this is clearly and beautifully written, with enough empathy and feelings to bring us into the characters mind yet so so much that it becomes mawkish and trite. So well balanced.
4/5/2015 c1 Guest
So eloquently written. You capture his physical and emotional states very well.
So eloquently written. You capture his physical and emotional states very well.
6/20/2014 c1 1dustykingdom
Wow! What an awesome story! I feel that you portrayed the doctor in a very realistic way. Definitely a favorite!
1dustykingdomWow! What an awesome story! I feel that you portrayed the doctor in a very realistic way. Definitely a favorite!
12/8/2012 c1 Guest
OMG, this was brillant! i love it love the doctor's emotion description
OMG, this was brillant! i love it love the doctor's emotion description
12/3/2012 c1 Guest
I've watched this episode so many times and this is exactly what should have happened between him getting off the train and finding Donna. I really like that the Doctor shows fear in this episode and you've captured his thoughts and feelings very well.
I've watched this episode so many times and this is exactly what should have happened between him getting off the train and finding Donna. I really like that the Doctor shows fear in this episode and you've captured his thoughts and feelings very well.
11/27/2012 c1 70Whirlwind421
Awww...poor Doctor. This is a really great fic. I really enjoyed your writing. I really liked it. :) I liked the way you described the Doctor's feelings and behaviours.
70Whirlwind421Awww...poor Doctor. This is a really great fic. I really enjoyed your writing. I really liked it. :) I liked the way you described the Doctor's feelings and behaviours.
11/25/2012 c1 104Rjalker
Awww! D:
Poor Doctor :(
...This...was amazing o.O I can't even out how awesome this was into words :D
104RjalkerAwww! D:
Poor Doctor :(
...This...was amazing o.O I can't even out how awesome this was into words :D
11/12/2012 c1 KittyQualtagh
This was fantastic! Brilliant angst, and a pleasure to read! D
This was fantastic! Brilliant angst, and a pleasure to read! D
9/4/2012 c1 LBZIP
This was one of my favorite episodes in the show, and there was never another one quite like it. But you've written a great exploration of the fear and darkness that the Doctor experienced in the aftermath. Really well done !
This was one of my favorite episodes in the show, and there was never another one quite like it. But you've written a great exploration of the fear and darkness that the Doctor experienced in the aftermath. Really well done !
8/15/2012 c1 11wibblylever
This is an excellent missing scene, that's so good it has left me wanting more. Well done.
11wibblyleverThis is an excellent missing scene, that's so good it has left me wanting more. Well done.
6/22/2012 c1 3HadaGracia
Awesome. Only thing I would change is when he said "Thanks. Love this coat." he should've continued "Was from Janis Joplin." - keeping the sentence choppy of course. Really well written in that respect; I found it totally believable, that and the fact that he couldn't focus his mind enough to use his psychic paper. That was quite a blow, like adding insult to injury. Poor Doctor. :(
3HadaGraciaAwesome. Only thing I would change is when he said "Thanks. Love this coat." he should've continued "Was from Janis Joplin." - keeping the sentence choppy of course. Really well written in that respect; I found it totally believable, that and the fact that he couldn't focus his mind enough to use his psychic paper. That was quite a blow, like adding insult to injury. Poor Doctor. :(
4/9/2012 c1 1yellow-craion
His trauma, confusion, need of comfort and relief when he finally finds Donna are tangible. Awesome work!
1yellow-craionHis trauma, confusion, need of comfort and relief when he finally finds Donna are tangible. Awesome work!
4/8/2012 c1 22Gentle Hobbit
Wow. You give such a harrowing aftermath for the Doctor-something they only hinted at in the show. You really show what an overwhelming experience Midnight was for him: the suspicion and rejection of who he was by the passengers, the theft of his voice and free will, and finally being the victim of mob panic.
It makes me want to read more, perhaps with Donna's presence helping him as he deals with what has happened to him.
22Gentle HobbitWow. You give such a harrowing aftermath for the Doctor-something they only hinted at in the show. You really show what an overwhelming experience Midnight was for him: the suspicion and rejection of who he was by the passengers, the theft of his voice and free will, and finally being the victim of mob panic.
It makes me want to read more, perhaps with Donna's presence helping him as he deals with what has happened to him.