for My Immortal: A Commentary4/12/2021 c1 Raven
Hot Topic does not exist in the UK. And Raven is doing her best. A vampire could in theory blush or bleed if the blood is sent to their cardiovascular system and not just their stomach.
Hot Topic does not exist in the UK. And Raven is doing her best. A vampire could in theory blush or bleed if the blood is sent to their cardiovascular system and not just their stomach.
8/14/2020 c13 sakura
thanks for not commenting on le troll's chapter; that stuff is sacred
the rest is trash your comments are the only good part
okay bye now :)
thanks for not commenting on le troll's chapter; that stuff is sacred
the rest is trash your comments are the only good part
okay bye now :)
8/14/2020 c9 sakura
her spelling is getting worse (if that's even possible) you made me laugh out loud with your comments several times though :)
her spelling is getting worse (if that's even possible) you made me laugh out loud with your comments several times though :)
8/14/2020 c7 sakura
this is really really really funny
this is really really really funny
8/14/2020 c6 sakura
i miss ravenclaw. best house! ravenclaw pride! your comments are literally my exact thoughts lmao good job
i miss ravenclaw. best house! ravenclaw pride! your comments are literally my exact thoughts lmao good job
8/14/2020 c5 sakura
'i'm just too beautiful and amazing and everyone wants to fuck me! it's a curse!'
you're right she's the final boss level of a mary sue
'i'm just too beautiful and amazing and everyone wants to fuck me! it's a curse!'
you're right she's the final boss level of a mary sue
8/14/2020 c4 sakura
how does she manage to forget literally every 'plot point' she's written in
how does she manage to forget literally every 'plot point' she's written in
8/14/2020 c3 sakura
heheheheh pineapples to come
heheheheh pineapples to come
8/14/2020 c2 sakura
canon!harry needs to come back :((((((
canon!harry needs to come back :((((((
8/14/2020 c1 sakura
wow
okay
tara is a genuinely shitty writer
thanks for the comments though :D
wow
okay
tara is a genuinely shitty writer
thanks for the comments though :D
8/21/2016 c11 
1pugloveryotwo
You're incredible for writing this. If Ebony met the real Voldemort...Hmm...
1pugloveryotwoYou're incredible for writing this. If Ebony met the real Voldemort...Hmm...
8/21/2016 c10 pugloveryotwo
Yes! Please write a story where Ebony meets the canon characters! That would be so epic! :3
Yes! Please write a story where Ebony meets the canon characters! That would be so epic! :3
12/26/2015 c4 Guest
"Hi." he said in a depressed way. "Hi back." I said in an wquallysaid If you can tell me what that word means you get virtual cookies. way.
wquallyaaid equally sad. You're welcome.
"Hi." he said in a depressed way. "Hi back." I said in an wquallysaid If you can tell me what that word means you get virtual cookies. way.
wquallyaaid equally sad. You're welcome.
12/21/2015 c4 Something Unpretty
I think the whole "wquallysaid" thing is supposed to be "equally sad." He said "Hi" sadly, she said it equally sadly. As much as I love virtual cookies, I need to leave this place, now. I'm not proud of how I can speak Enobby, and I'm starting to type like Tara. This is taking me so long to type because I'm being so careful. Earlier, I kept mixing said and sad up, though it is fixed. Ugh, I need to go to my good friend The Phrontistery for some medication. You have my pity for having to slog through this bullshit.
I think the whole "wquallysaid" thing is supposed to be "equally sad." He said "Hi" sadly, she said it equally sadly. As much as I love virtual cookies, I need to leave this place, now. I'm not proud of how I can speak Enobby, and I'm starting to type like Tara. This is taking me so long to type because I'm being so careful. Earlier, I kept mixing said and sad up, though it is fixed. Ugh, I need to go to my good friend The Phrontistery for some medication. You have my pity for having to slog through this bullshit.
11/30/2015 c14 14Ariana Peverell
I have this image of Voldemort sucking on an owl's face... can't stop laughing...
14Ariana PeverellI have this image of Voldemort sucking on an owl's face... can't stop laughing...