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2sparkar
It is an interesting idea that I would love to see play out. Even if it would change a lot of the later details of Once Upon a Time I'd love to see how this would play out.
2sparkarIt is an interesting idea that I would love to see play out. Even if it would change a lot of the later details of Once Upon a Time I'd love to see how this would play out.
5/5/2020 c3 13Sailor Dragonball 87
I love this! Why doesn’t Emma want to keep Dean and Henry a secret from one another? Will either of them ever know the truth? I’d love to see where this goes! Please update this or write a sequel!
13Sailor Dragonball 87I love this! Why doesn’t Emma want to keep Dean and Henry a secret from one another? Will either of them ever know the truth? I’d love to see where this goes! Please update this or write a sequel!
11/2/2018 c3 120Bad Ass Female Fighter
I haven't watched Supernatural, but I have seen Dean's character, and I gotta say, he's hilarious. Even though OUAT has ended, doesn't mean the stories have to, I like this idea of Dean being Henry's Father. I hope you come back.
120Bad Ass Female FighterI haven't watched Supernatural, but I have seen Dean's character, and I gotta say, he's hilarious. Even though OUAT has ended, doesn't mean the stories have to, I like this idea of Dean being Henry's Father. I hope you come back.
5/26/2014 c3 1pinkkittyviv
I really liked the premise of the story and how you intertwined the shows. You did that very well. One thing I noticed, though, is that you kept changing back and forth between first and third person perspective. It was really confusing at times. Other than that, I really enjoyed the story! Hope you write more!
1pinkkittyvivI really liked the premise of the story and how you intertwined the shows. You did that very well. One thing I noticed, though, is that you kept changing back and forth between first and third person perspective. It was really confusing at times. Other than that, I really enjoyed the story! Hope you write more!
5/21/2014 c3 CaptainSwan
Make more please it was hilarious I love it
Make more please it was hilarious I love it
4/29/2014 c3 Azurii
First I'd like to say it is pretty late in the night so I may ramble a bit. This story does have promise but I'm wondering if there is a reason why the Winchesters are in Storybrooke? Which season it takes place in (I know its an au but a little knowledge on what they have seen so far would be nice, put in the authors note or maybe some small hint in your next chapter, if they have met Cas yet or not). At least with Storybrooke you mentioned that Emma is sheriff and that the town is still cursed, also that Regina is preventing Emma and Henry from talking (we know where we are at).
I like that you haven't changed Emma and her giving birth in jail, though Dean has no clue about it. It'd be cool to continue to delve into that, tell us how they met.
One thing that I really noticed in this chapter is you switch between first and third point of view and while reading it I got confused about it. You may want to go back and just read over it and correct the mistakes.
Good luck with the rest of the story.
First I'd like to say it is pretty late in the night so I may ramble a bit. This story does have promise but I'm wondering if there is a reason why the Winchesters are in Storybrooke? Which season it takes place in (I know its an au but a little knowledge on what they have seen so far would be nice, put in the authors note or maybe some small hint in your next chapter, if they have met Cas yet or not). At least with Storybrooke you mentioned that Emma is sheriff and that the town is still cursed, also that Regina is preventing Emma and Henry from talking (we know where we are at).
I like that you haven't changed Emma and her giving birth in jail, though Dean has no clue about it. It'd be cool to continue to delve into that, tell us how they met.
One thing that I really noticed in this chapter is you switch between first and third point of view and while reading it I got confused about it. You may want to go back and just read over it and correct the mistakes.
Good luck with the rest of the story.
12/2/2013 c3 Guest
Add more chapters I just started reading it and you leave it at a cliffhanger. Damn you. ADD MORE
Add more chapters I just started reading it and you leave it at a cliffhanger. Damn you. ADD MORE
9/7/2013 c3 Guest
Please update soon! Love it!
Please update soon! Love it!
6/26/2013 c3 Kellyann211
I loved emma and dean's back and forth when telling him about the curse. great job.
I loved emma and dean's back and forth when telling him about the curse. great job.