
7/8/2012 c1 justaislinn
Plz update this! I can see it being just a cute, one chapter story- but I wana see how this pa s out! I luv your work and this could be really interesting:)
Plz update this! I can see it being just a cute, one chapter story- but I wana see how this pa s out! I luv your work and this could be really interesting:)
3/21/2012 c1 Brittana4ever
no offense you Chloe sound and act like a class A slut also. If She bang Simon in his and Derek's room would have Derek smell Sex or least hear and if Chloe clamied to be with 2 guys in 1 night would Derek ask "If she was a virgin and how boyfriends did she have in the past" Simon seemed like a jackass who was or is trying steal Chloe away from Derek in a few fanfics I have read. I'm just pointing out it could be better like Derek and Chloe had a HOT makeout seasson got carried away and now she's pregnant with Simon involement. Just try that and let me know if you like my advice
no offense you Chloe sound and act like a class A slut also. If She bang Simon in his and Derek's room would have Derek smell Sex or least hear and if Chloe clamied to be with 2 guys in 1 night would Derek ask "If she was a virgin and how boyfriends did she have in the past" Simon seemed like a jackass who was or is trying steal Chloe away from Derek in a few fanfics I have read. I'm just pointing out it could be better like Derek and Chloe had a HOT makeout seasson got carried away and now she's pregnant with Simon involement. Just try that and let me know if you like my advice