for la playa9/18/2013 c1 Guest
Admiro tu valor para escribir en un idioma diferente, animo.
Admiro tu valor para escribir en un idioma diferente, animo.
4/7/2012 c1 
4Xime Son
Mal mal mal.
If you don't know how to write correcly in spanish don't do it, I'm native spanish and my english is on level 7 from 9 levels in my high school, please learn more, your grammar is awfull i could not understand anything, first learn some grammar and puntuation please. Write on english it's better for you.
4Xime SonMal mal mal.
If you don't know how to write correcly in spanish don't do it, I'm native spanish and my english is on level 7 from 9 levels in my high school, please learn more, your grammar is awfull i could not understand anything, first learn some grammar and puntuation please. Write on english it's better for you.
3/27/2012 c1 3Kumikoson4
Well my English isn´t perfect, because I´m a student yet, but I can say you: good for trying, I´m not an expert, but you need to improve some word order, because the idea it´s interesting.
Bueno como el idioma es diferente, hay algunas cosas que no puedo expresar como me gustaría, pero creo que tu fic es entendible hasta cierto punto.
:)
3Kumikoson4Well my English isn´t perfect, because I´m a student yet, but I can say you: good for trying, I´m not an expert, but you need to improve some word order, because the idea it´s interesting.
Bueno como el idioma es diferente, hay algunas cosas que no puedo expresar como me gustaría, pero creo que tu fic es entendible hasta cierto punto.
:)
3/24/2012 c1 elpatolocosisi
As far as I could understand you wanted some feedback on your spanish writing skills, am I right?
Well, I must say you clearly need to learn a lot more before writing. I'm not trying to discourage you, I'm just saying you need to improve.
I'm afraid to say I could barely understand what you were trying to say and my native language IS spanish...
Mejor suerte para la próxima!
As far as I could understand you wanted some feedback on your spanish writing skills, am I right?
Well, I must say you clearly need to learn a lot more before writing. I'm not trying to discourage you, I'm just saying you need to improve.
I'm afraid to say I could barely understand what you were trying to say and my native language IS spanish...
Mejor suerte para la próxima!