for The Mark of Athena6/6/2012 c3 1
it's really good but please update soon!
it's really good but please update soon!
5/20/2012 c1 
3greenseas
hey, why aren't you updating? u promised! or at least..i think u did...:) i just realize that this isn't in my favouritesss! sorry if i'm spamming ur mail, but i just clicked all four of the below options :D y u no updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?
3greenseashey, why aren't you updating? u promised! or at least..i think u did...:) i just realize that this isn't in my favouritesss! sorry if i'm spamming ur mail, but i just clicked all four of the below options :D y u no updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?
5/18/2012 c3 Isabel
I really like it, creative, clever and smart! PLEASE continue! X
I really like it, creative, clever and smart! PLEASE continue! X
5/11/2012 c3 greenseas
thankyou abby! i mean its great to read your own work and all, but thats the thing,, its WORK! just reading is much easier! this is awesome! i'm really glad you got straight to the point and they are on their way to camp half blood right away. i needed some action :D quick question: r u gonna do reyson or pison? :D
thankyou abby! i mean its great to read your own work and all, but thats the thing,, its WORK! just reading is much easier! this is awesome! i'm really glad you got straight to the point and they are on their way to camp half blood right away. i needed some action :D quick question: r u gonna do reyson or pison? :D
5/10/2012 c3 7Reality Hits Hard
Wait, that was quite quick. It's like Percy just says "Oh Annabeth's the seventh, let's leave now" without explaining to the others why. And also, where's Octavian? Plus, the Romans should have a Senate meeting to authorize the quest. After all, you know how they are. Another thing. This chapter went by too quickly. I think that there should have been a Senate Meeting, problems from Octavian, tension between Percy and Jason (not that much though), and they should have stayed at Camp Jupiter longer.
So, yeah.
7Reality Hits HardWait, that was quite quick. It's like Percy just says "Oh Annabeth's the seventh, let's leave now" without explaining to the others why. And also, where's Octavian? Plus, the Romans should have a Senate meeting to authorize the quest. After all, you know how they are. Another thing. This chapter went by too quickly. I think that there should have been a Senate Meeting, problems from Octavian, tension between Percy and Jason (not that much though), and they should have stayed at Camp Jupiter longer.
So, yeah.
5/10/2012 c3 4LivGirl16
Gah, that was AWESOME! totally sweet and cute and ADORABLE
*shrieks* hehehe :)
4LivGirl16Gah, that was AWESOME! totally sweet and cute and ADORABLE
*shrieks* hehehe :)
5/2/2012 c2 3greenseas
"You know you want to click that button" XD nothing better than an author with a sense of humor! :) and "I'm not sure how long the kiss lasted, but it wasn't long enough." Sentence of a Pure Genius, i wish i'd thought of it! this is awesome, but are you still updating? hope so!
3greenseas"You know you want to click that button" XD nothing better than an author with a sense of humor! :) and "I'm not sure how long the kiss lasted, but it wasn't long enough." Sentence of a Pure Genius, i wish i'd thought of it! this is awesome, but are you still updating? hope so!
4/25/2012 c2 2I'mOnlyMe00
This was pretty good! The reunion was really cute and I loved it! Update soon, please! :)
2I'mOnlyMe00This was pretty good! The reunion was really cute and I loved it! Update soon, please! :)
4/19/2012 c2 5CrazyPeanutAttack
Oh how did you know I desperately wanted to press the button? Well cuz this is an awesome story, if I do say so myself! Keep the updates comin, hun;)
5CrazyPeanutAttackOh how did you know I desperately wanted to press the button? Well cuz this is an awesome story, if I do say so myself! Keep the updates comin, hun;)
4/2/2012 c1 6athena grl
ok, i know people have already said this...but that's so cute! since you want constructive critiscisme-that's to long, i'm just calling it c.c. [sorry, i won't use capitols, im not saying C.C.] but i'll be picky. like how did annabeth know that percy went on a quest? and grammer-but EVERYBODY has grammer problems, even me, i'll admit it. ;) but also, i don't think percy would pick up annabeth, never mind twirl her. but as i said before, i being picky! so don't take it very seriously, i'm just being VERY picky because you asked for some c.c. so, there you go! p.s.awsome story!
6athena grlok, i know people have already said this...but that's so cute! since you want constructive critiscisme-that's to long, i'm just calling it c.c. [sorry, i won't use capitols, im not saying C.C.] but i'll be picky. like how did annabeth know that percy went on a quest? and grammer-but EVERYBODY has grammer problems, even me, i'll admit it. ;) but also, i don't think percy would pick up annabeth, never mind twirl her. but as i said before, i being picky! so don't take it very seriously, i'm just being VERY picky because you asked for some c.c. so, there you go! p.s.awsome story!
4/1/2012 c1 kittyninja
Sooooo sweet! Their made for each other! Anyway, please update! It's really good!
Happy Writing!
Sooooo sweet! Their made for each other! Anyway, please update! It's really good!
Happy Writing!