5/1/2012 c1 2MVPotato
Story was okay. It does capture Haruto's excessive kindness and indecisiveness fairly well. The plot is okay as well. But, nothing really eye catching about it. However, the formatting was a bit of a pain. When Nanami says something quote, italicize, or just do something to indicate that she is saying something. I do know when she talks due to context, but it is rather displeasing to the eye.

Anyways, good job with your fic.