6/30/2013 c1 Tay
THIS STORY SUCKS HOW U GONNA GET NINA TO NOT LIKE EDDIE IN SIBUNA THAT'S HER PROTECTOR DUMB ASS U SHOULD BE ASHAMED CAUSE APPARENTLY U DONT KNOW HOW TO WRITE GOOD STORIES ABOUT SIBUNA BITXH AND U A DICK HEAD
THIS STORY SUCKS HOW U GONNA GET NINA TO NOT LIKE EDDIE IN SIBUNA THAT'S HER PROTECTOR DUMB ASS U SHOULD BE ASHAMED CAUSE APPARENTLY U DONT KNOW HOW TO WRITE GOOD STORIES ABOUT SIBUNA BITXH AND U A DICK HEAD
4/3/2012 c10 2MissMountainGirl
I am so sad Nathalia is leaving! Even if they do find someone to replace her it won't be the same. I am hoping that Nathalia will change her mind and find some way to stay!
I am so sad Nathalia is leaving! Even if they do find someone to replace her it won't be the same. I am hoping that Nathalia will change her mind and find some way to stay!
4/1/2012 c7 5NightmarishStar
Hey! :)
Great chapter! :D
Don't worry, I've voted on your poll as well! :D
Update soon!
~NS~
Hey! :)
Great chapter! :D
Don't worry, I've voted on your poll as well! :D
Update soon!
~NS~
4/1/2012 c7 3fangirls see differently
Wow. I aree with Sarah; Lizzy is insane, eckless, annoying, and full of pride.
Wow. I aree with Sarah; Lizzy is insane, eckless, annoying, and full of pride.
3/31/2012 c6 2It's always me
Sorry i had just found this story so i didnt know you updated every day I loved this chapter
Sorry i had just found this story so i didnt know you updated every day I loved this chapter
3/29/2012 c5 2It's always me
This is a really cool story plz update soon and could you check out one or both of my stories i will really happy
This is a really cool story plz update soon and could you check out one or both of my stories i will really happy
3/29/2012 c4 22Cerulean Apocalypse
I'm going for a 'Yay! Anothar chapter!' review.
I don't think that Laura and Lizzy are the same person. I think that Laura has taken a Vera-like postion, meaning she's really a spy.
Good job. This chapter was a bit sad, but I agree with Lizzy about women of that day being treated something like Kleenexes. Although I don't think that the Kleenex company had been around at the time... if it was, okay then.
Interesting how they never knew about Mrs. Z's death cause... although this would explain how Rufus knew about tipping the scales of life and Victor did not.
~Apocalypse=)
I'm going for a 'Yay! Anothar chapter!' review.
I don't think that Laura and Lizzy are the same person. I think that Laura has taken a Vera-like postion, meaning she's really a spy.
Good job. This chapter was a bit sad, but I agree with Lizzy about women of that day being treated something like Kleenexes. Although I don't think that the Kleenex company had been around at the time... if it was, okay then.
Interesting how they never knew about Mrs. Z's death cause... although this would explain how Rufus knew about tipping the scales of life and Victor did not.
~Apocalypse=)
3/26/2012 c2 22Cerulean Apocalypse
Very interesting so far; I really like it.
A short note of criticism, I think that Nina and Eddie don't have such a... I don't want to say a hate relationship, it's just more vague (I think that's the word).
Other than that, I think it's really interesting. Something about this story I just really like so far. I'm not quite sure what, but it's good. Proper grammar, an interesting plot, and a few funny lines. Great work so far, I'm going to keep reading.
~Apocalypse=)
Very interesting so far; I really like it.
A short note of criticism, I think that Nina and Eddie don't have such a... I don't want to say a hate relationship, it's just more vague (I think that's the word).
Other than that, I think it's really interesting. Something about this story I just really like so far. I'm not quite sure what, but it's good. Proper grammar, an interesting plot, and a few funny lines. Great work so far, I'm going to keep reading.
~Apocalypse=)