7/11/2013 c1 15XblackcatwidowX
Hey, your English is fine! Just a few typos here and there, but other than that I loved your story.

11/5/2012 c1 5Cammie Cassia Chase
Love it.
-Cam

5/30/2012 c1 EternallyPivots
I love you too 3

And I love your story!

5/6/2012 c1 6expectopadfoot
i love james/lily stories and this was really great! if your english was better, it would've been awesome. you have to be careful with grammar, for example its not "putted" its just "put".

hope you produce more stories like this :)

4/11/2012 c1 Mareeweasley7
that is great

luv the part where Remus and Sirius are laughing 3 it makes me laugh so thank you for that :)

4/7/2012 c1 010000
The story is very charming and I think your style of writing is Kesw personable, I was never really big on James and Lily just because in my head they are 'parents' and there is just something a bit off putting about the whole debacle but upon reading this I feel like, not only are they relatable but you managed to keep the charactors fresh but still themselves!

You have converted me! I am now on the Lily and James ship!

Your English in the story was fine, not perfect but easy to understand and more importantly it was nice to read, your style of writing is just so full of enthusiasm that it is contagious!

I really liked it!

Keep writing!

3/27/2012 c1 Guest
Loved it i thought it was adorable