
3/27/2012 c1 iloveleam
Hey
the story was pretty good :)
and not trying to tell you how to write, but you could put spaces between lines, and separate the dialogs, it makes better for us to read.
sorry my bad english.
Hey
the story was pretty good :)
and not trying to tell you how to write, but you could put spaces between lines, and separate the dialogs, it makes better for us to read.
sorry my bad english.